i need to write a poem for a project and i wrote one but i dont know if it would be good so can someone tell me what they think Will give medel and what ever else i can give

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dr0zier99 · Answer

love is pain, as i sit hear tears roll down my face i thought i had something but in reality she lied killing me inside so as i think of a reason to live i find nothing but pain sorrow and hatred so as i cry my self to sleep i think of her betrayal.

dr0zier99 · Answer

@limecake08

dr0zier99 · Answer

so what do you think do you think it will make agood grade

anonymous · Answer

yes it is perfect and cute i adoor it

dr0zier99 · Answer

thank you