Question

Read Delilah’s personal narrative.

My cat has been in my family for six years. We adopted her from the animal shelter when she was two years old and I was nine. Her name is Bettie. She is a very kind and loving cat. She always cheers me up when I feel sad. She has taught me a lot about kindness.

What would best improve Delilah’s narrative?

information about her cat’s background
words that further describe the qualities of her cat
an explanation of the effect her cat had on her life
examples that demonstrate her cat’s qualities