Question

I already have answers can you please review them?

Answer 1

Read the sentence and answer the question that follows:

Historical buildings in the small Kansas town were completely destroyed by the unexpected storm.

Which word may be eliminated to remove redundancy?

Historical
Small
Completely
Unexpected

Answer 2

i believe it is d

Answer 3

im not really sure. ill give my best guess tho. i think its c or b. because we dont need to know if the town was small and we dont need to know that the building was completely destroyed.

Answer 4

all we need to kno is that it was destroyed

Answer 5

Oh yeah i see! can i ask another question?

Answer 6

sure

Answer 7

Which sentence includes an announcement phrase that should be eliminated to make the statement more concise?

Assigning lockers to middle school students is an effective way to teach them time management.
Lockers should be provided to middle school students so that they can learn time management.
Middle school students would learn time management if they were provided lockers.
This essay proves that middle school students should have lockers to learn time management.

Answer 8

i think it is a

Answer 9

i honestly think its c. because all of the sentences are trying to say that that the children would learn time management by have in lockers. and c says that without all of the irrelevant words.

Answer 10

i see, that!
Read the paragraph and answer the question that follows:

The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens. The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger. If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives. With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.

Which sentence should be revised to eliminate redundancy?

The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens.
The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger.
If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives.
With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.

Answer 11

this one ikeep getting wrong.

Answer 12

have you ever used b as a answer?

Answer 13

no, ihavnt... reading and language arts isnt my strong point

Answer 14

i have one more?

Answer 15

okay

Answer 16

Read the sentence and answer the question that follows:

In the event that you spy a tornado, go and seek shelter in a dark room that has no windows.

Which statement best describes how this sentence can be made more concise.

It has a phrase that can be converted to reduce wordiness.
It has a modifier that may be eliminated because it does not add any meaning.
It has a redundant phrase that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.
It has a redundant pair that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.

Answer 17

is it c?

Answer 18

@BigDreams

Answer 19

um.....im not sure about this question. im not sure but i would go with b.

Answer 20

okay thanks so much!!!!!

Answer 21

no problem c:

Answer 22

bye! have a nice day

Answer 23

you too.