Question

I don't normally do this but I'm interested to see what people think/interpret. I'm thick skinned so be honest. These are lyrics I've written recently for a song I'm writing. So far there's only one verse. I'll see if I can write another one soon.

Answer 1

Actions Speak Louder than Words

Verse 1:

I saw you standing there with your eyes turned heaven-ward
Tears upon your face showed me that something beautiful had occurred
Actions speak louder than words, or so they say.

Still silence was broken by some words I won't forget.
Your voice like a whisper from your heart you said,
"I believe that these things are true, what more can I do."

Chorus:

If you heed these words tonight you'll find
Your heart was true
But if you forget these things you've felt inside
They will come back to you

It's your choice.
Don't take my words as truth
Follow the voice of light
That will lead you.

Answer 2

i love it

Answer 3

very pretty

Answer 4

Hey, thanks.