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OpenStudy (anonymous):

How does depression affect your independence ?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Will fan and Medal

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Persistently sad mood, "feeling blue" Feelings of hopelessness and a pessimistic outlook on life Guilty feelings, feelings of worthlessness Loss of libido Insomnia, early-morning awakening, or oversleeping Decreased appetite and/or weight loss or overeating and weight gain Loss of interest in hobbies and other social activities Fatigue, decreased energy Thoughts of suicide or suicide attempts Restlessness, irritability Difficulty concentrating, remembering, making decisions Persistent physical symptoms that do not respond to treatment, such as headaches, digestive disorders, and chronic pains

OpenStudy (anonymous):

those are signs

OpenStudy (anonymous):

maybe those can help you figure out how it affects independence!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I'm having to write a essay of losing independence and have no clue where to start do you think you can help me with this essay? @MasterStudy

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Sure what can I do?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Is it about losing independence in different ways?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

the paper says I have to have a thesis statement . also topic sentences and the body of the essay has to be clear about losing independence from depression . I have to have 3 examples of parallelism.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@MasterStudy

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Ok! let me think....

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Wait do you go to flvs?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I do Connections Academy in SC

OpenStudy (anonymous):

OK ok because I had a friend that had the exact same question from a while ago!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

How did he/she do his ?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Well lets start with thesis a thesis is the point that an essay is trying to prove. Also known as the claim or argument

OpenStudy (anonymous):

could it be " depression is a sickness that affects billions of people around the world today"?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

That sounds perfect but try to add on more to that just so you have a longer introduction sentence.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

what could I add?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

After that sentence you could say people struggle with this everyday, and truly it messes with there independence as well.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Do you have the finished product of your introduction sentence?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

okay thanks next we need the body which will be difficult for me :( Also yes - Thesis and Topic sentence - Depression is a sickness that affects billions of people around the world today . People struggle with this everyday, and it can affect there independence

OpenStudy (anonymous):

good?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Yasss!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Okay! Now the body !

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Ok so first we need one topic sentence to start your body

OpenStudy (anonymous):

what should it be about?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

types of depression?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Ok!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

So which type should we start with?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

bipolar depression?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Good! now we need a starting topic sentence!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

That states that we are going to talk about bipolar depression in the paragraph

OpenStudy (anonymous):

okay so maybe " bipolar depression is one of the biggest types of depression there is . It is a mental and sometimes physical type of depression that affects every aspect of your life . ?????

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Yes that is good!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Depression is a mental issue where you tend to be a bit more pessimistic towards things. People who are depressed to tend be a bit more unstable and unconfident, so people who don't think they're worth much, will typically tend to be pushed around more than others and not have the motivation to fight back when they're being used. Think about when a girl is in an abusive relationship yet she still says with the spouse. Why is she there? Why is she putting up with that? Either out of empty promises or because she thinks she's not worth more than that.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I have to go and get dressed hang tight!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I say we need should do the body about bipolar depression and what it can cause like suicidal thoughts and what people do to try to '' stop the pain'' by harming themselves

OpenStudy (anonymous):

also , including how if affects independence

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@MasterStudy

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Yes good one!

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