Question

i need help writing a book

Answer 1

Hey Az!

Answer 2

What do you need help with?

Answer 3

I can help you with any questions you have.

Answer 4

i need to write more descriptively

Answer 5

Ok, first off, what type of book are you writing f/nf?

Answer 6

fiction

Answer 7

Ok, what exactly do you think you're missing in your writing?

Answer 8

idk, i'm too brief

Answer 9

Let's take a look at a sample from your book:
Leo woke up with an ache in his head.
How can we improve this sentence?

Answer 10

idk

Answer 11

Using multiple sentences, for one thing.
Subject and Predicate:
Leo opened his eyes.
New sentence:
He put his fingers to his head and felt a throbbing pain.
Adjectival/adverbial descriptive aid
His head was on fire.

Answer 12

@Azbadar

Answer 13

oh, that is better

Answer 14

Looking at your book on google docs. Would you like me to help you with grammar as well?

Answer 15

yep

Answer 16

Requested edit access.

Answer 17

thx

Answer 18

You're welcome.

Answer 19

Welcome to OpenStudy!

Answer 20

yay