Question

I wrote a song. I need some people to read it over and see if it's not bad.

Answer 1

Give me the lyrics I love writing songs!

Answer 2

Sometimes, when I am alone,
I'll think about us, where have we gone?
You're never around, you make me feel so down,
But I'm so over that, over that, tonight.
(That would be my first line. I don't know if it's any good, because in all honesty, I just wrote it two minutes ago.)

Answer 3

I LOVE that!!!!

Answer 4

Thanks. :P

Answer 5

welcome :)

Answer 6

Do you have a website where I can make a short video of me singing that? Because I have two different sort of tunes for the song that I'd like to show you.

Answer 7

@Directioner2001 ^

Answer 8

Oh I don't sorry :( if you can get a Utube account put it up there
do u want to be a singer too ?1

Answer 9

@Directioner2001 Yeah. :P But I have no instruments. Well, I have a piano, but I can't make up any real melodies on that. ;-;

Answer 10

oh :( that stinks

Answer 11

Well I've got my voice. A cappella. XD

Answer 12

cool! do u want to be a singer?! i want to it is my dream

Answer 13

It's my dream too. :P Sorry about the late response, also I have to go, but I'll send you the things later, if I remember. Stupid school. ;-;

Answer 14

love it

Answer 15

Thanks.

Answer 16

I'll send you the link too, when I'm done with school.

Answer 17

Okay :)

Answer 18

I like it. cant wait to see the rest of it!

Answer 19

Thanks. :P

Answer 20

love it so much

Answer 21

I know how to mix songs so maybe you can send me a recording of you singing and i can mix it up and give it some beat cuz girl u hav talent

Answer 22

Oh, nice. Thanks, will do.

Answer 23

U can send me it by email

Answer 24

Uniqueartist1@yahoo.com

Answer 25

No, I'll do it through OS

Answer 26

i love the lyrics. its good. i also write music and i want to be a singer.

Answer 27

Cool. :P Thanks.

Answer 28

@Peach3113 Many people who post song that they sing use http://vocaroo.com/ Try it since u want to sing it :)

Answer 29

@KendrickLamar2014 Thanks.<3

Answer 30

My pleasure

Answer 31

@teresar7
@Uniqueartist1
@quin100
@Directioner2001
@OwlsandR5
My voice is awkward and sucky so it's not that great, but this is what I have written so far.
I added oh's and yeah's just to add a little bit to the song. XD

Answer 32

So yeah, tell me what you think.

Answer 33

It's actually pretty decent. Obviously it would be better with accompaniment because it'll boost your vocal confidence, but for a capella vocals on a self-written melody, it was actually pretty good.

Answer 34

Thanks. :P

Answer 35

YW anytime! XD

Answer 36

love it

Answer 37

omg i love it!!!!!! @Peach3113 its wonderful!

Answer 38

what did u record that on?

Answer 39

@teresar7 I used QuickTime Player. It's on my mac.

Answer 40

@teresar7 It's not the best but it works.

Answer 41

@Peach3113 :) I like it.

Answer 42

@Poppopopop Thanks. :P I'm probably not gonna continue it, because right now I'm working on a duet with someone.

Answer 43

@CallMeEmmie Have you been viewing my song forever? XD

Answer 44

Nah.. I was messaging someone and I forgot I was on here. My bad

Answer 45

@CallMeEmmie Haha, okay. :P

Answer 46

@teresar7 Good morning. :P

Answer 47

@Peach3113 good morning!!!

Answer 48

Soo Good! OMG.

Answer 49

ummmm..... The lyrics arent very... in time.... like rythmically. what style of musica are you implementing?

Answer 50

i like it i wanna hear u sing it :)

Answer 51

@Bamboo888 Thank you. :)

Answer 52

@Theloshua The lyrics are in time to me and to several other people. I'm thinking the genre would be upbeat pop. Maybe you're reading it as something else? I dunno. :P

Answer 53

@chocolove22 Okay. :P

Answer 54

loop the song. if you dont know how to loop a song all you need is a computer and some kind of music software a mic and everyday household items. use the household items as your instruments then sing the lyrics to your song in the process.

Answer 55

there is a guy on youtube called social repose who covers a whole bunch of popular songs by looping their songs.

Answer 56

Cool. I'll try it. And I've seen a few things like that.

Answer 57

OMG! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 58

@Directioner2001 Thank you. :)

Answer 59

so far so good, cant wait till its finished.

Answer 60

@Xbeast Thanks.

Answer 61

I Like it ALOOTT

Answer 62

Thanks. :P

Answer 63

Your Welcome :]

Answer 64

Awesomeee

Answer 65

@Legends Thanks!

Answer 66

@Xbeast Ay :P

Answer 67

whats up?

Answer 68

Nothing much. Wanna finish that song with me?

Answer 69

Or write a new song with me?

Answer 70

@Xbeast ^

Answer 71

sure, I wouldnt mid helping at all. just msg me to let me know when and how you want to start.

Answer 72

part 2 part 2 part 2!!!!!!!!

Answer 73

@Peach3113 , I really love the rhyme in this paragraph , It really brings a story of someone asking where have they gone and I love it! good joB

Answer 74

@naveahHall Okay, I will make one. XD
@Frozen15 Thank you. :D

Answer 75

@navaehHall , tagged you with the wrong username by accident. XD sorry

Answer 76

your welcome , keep up the awesome work :)

Answer 77

@Frozen15 Thank you, I'll try. :P

Answer 78

good XD

Answer 79

@Frozen15 :P

Answer 80

you cold record yhour audio with http://vocaroo.com/ and then copy n paste the link to open study

Answer 81

Ohmagosh this is so old.

Answer 82

That's the best aceppella I have ever heard in my life quite frankly.
You have a really really beautiful voice. Your breathing needs to be a tad more fluent, but other than that I seriously haven't any complaints. Very unique and worth appreciating :)

Answer 83

Woah, where's the link at? I'd love to hear you sing! The lyrics look good.

Answer 84

this been a month ago lol

Answer 85

@Frozen15 I know but it doesn't mean I can't hear his/her talent!

Answer 86

true , she/he may be still writing the song? no idea but hopefully he/she does great

Answer 87

nice

Answer 88

lol im taking choir in 6th grade. A lot of people say Im a good singer but I bet ur better. :)

Answer 89

@Atsie Thanks! :D

Answer 90

@rebeccaxhawaii Thanks. :P

Answer 91

@Frozen15 I stopped, but I'll totally be back. My Soundtrap account is Rae Lee.