While Aynsley Dunbar has drummed in some of the greatest rock bands of all time, his style incorporates jazz, fusion, blues, and playing progressive rock.

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The ideas are not coordinate.
It lacks parallel structure.
There’s excessive coordination.
It has an incorrect coordinate conjunction.

Question

While Aynsley Dunbar has drummed in some of the greatest rock bands of all time, his style incorporates jazz, fusion, blues, and playing progressive rock.

 

What is wrong with the sentence?

The ideas are not coordinate.
It lacks parallel structure.
There’s excessive coordination.
It has an incorrect coordinate conjunction.

anonymous · Answer

لغتي العربية ليست كما يجب

anonymous · Answer

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