Question

So, I wrote a song. I need a chorus, and, if you all want, maybe give me guitar chords to play it to.
Here it goes.

I've been chasing after you
since I first saw your face.
Oh, your personality
It's perfect in every way.
You're kind, you're caring
Playful, too.
I just want to be with you.
You make me smile
a big goofy grin.
If I loved you
Would it be a sin?
I want to hold you
In my arms
And keep you safe
From any harm.
I want you to know
How much I love you.

Im sure someone here is better writing music and all. You could suggest improvements,anything to make it better

Answer 1

Welcome to OpenStudy @JasonSpade

Honestly Dude @JasonSpade I read it, and its awesome! but this is the feedback section. This belongs in the music section :P At the top of the screen, you'll find, find more subjects link. Click that and find the Music section and make a post and put it there. and Welcome to OpenStudy :)

Answer 2

@TheSmartOne lel

Answer 3

lol