What is wrong with this paragraph please help have to turn in tonight!

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ronlover101 · Answer

The reason why I do not like Abortions is because. That baby has a role in life to live. They can either be a husband, a mother, a sister,a brother, daughter, or even son.  Everyone in this world was brought here for a reason. And to take a life from your child is selfish. God has a plan for every human being in this world. Instead throwing a seed in the trash can. Why don’t you plant it in the ground. Take care of it. Watch it grow, and watch the beauty come out so the whole world can see it! Every single human being as a purpose in this world. Every life is precious. Now we need to stand as a family and help the weak grow strong as a team. I believe that I can help Women through hard times. I choose life because everyone on this earth has a RIGHT TO LIFE!!

anonymous · Answer

First of all, you can't end a sentence with the word 'because.' You can't start a sentence with the word 'and'. If you start a sentence with the word 'why' you have to end it in a question mark. I think you meant 'right to live'..but 'right to life' is also correct. I'll just rewrite it correctly:)

There are many reasons why I don't like abortion. I feel that babies have roles in life too. The babies could be a part of a family as either as a husband, mother, sister, brother, son or daughter. Everyone was brought her for a reason...

well you closed the question so....

anonymous · Answer

You closed it so I quit correcting it :p

ronlover101 · Answer

That was a accident i ment to bump it up sorry

ronlover101 · Answer

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anonymous · Answer

There are many reasons why I don't like abortion. I feel that babies have roles in life too. The babies could be a part of a family as either as a husband, mother, sister, brother, son or daughter. Everyone was brought here for a reason.  To take a life from a child is selfish. God has a plan for everyone in this world. Don't throw life away like a seed into a trash can. If life is like a seed, why don't they plant the seed and watch it grow? Watching a child grow is watching the beauty of life grow. Every single human being has a purpose in this world.  Every life is precious, so we need to take a stand. I believe that families standing strong together can help women in life. I'm against abortion, and I choose life because everyone deserves a right to live!