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OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Can someone explain me this worksheet?? I mean the planning process

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

so basically they want me to use the planning process to plan out last year of high school (grade 12).

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

@iMariella can you please look at it

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

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OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

@Shards-of-a-Soul

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

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OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

crap i dunno if i'll be any help i'm a freshman in high school but i will take a look at it

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

ok thnx

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

for 1 they are basically asking where do u want to go like what college

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

you have to know where u want to go

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

My future plan is to get into a University for Computer Science my choice is York University, it requires more than a 70% marks to get in. The first way to accomplish this goal is to get higher marks in my all course so that I can easily apply for York University. The second way to accomplish my goal is to really work hard for achieving it. I believe that I am not very far related to the mark but the main thing is to maintain it. I think I am not that far from my objectives but still need to work on my weaknesses because sometimes weakness is what causes and may trouble. I believe that right know I am at a stage where the things might go right and may even go wrong. I have to keep focus on my plan and try to achieve my goals because it would affect my future. There are so many things in life that are suddenly happen which may also affect our future plan as well so that why we have to care about those things such as the example of this be if I wrote a test at the end of the last semester and I fail it that would affect whether my marks.

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

this is what i have done so far

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

sounds good do u think that will be enough

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

@Whitemonsterbunny17 can u help

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

too

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

for 2 its talking about what is your weakness that will hold u back in getting into that school

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

I think that is a good start. ^.^

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

did u already graduate high school u may be very helpful ^

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Now, for the second one, all it is asking is for some examples of things you have done that you believe are contributing towards you reaching that goal. It also asks you what you think your strengths and weaknesses are toward reaching that goal. Also, I am currently a Senior in high school, so I suppose I could be of help here. :p

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

But I do think your are very helpful here as well @safyousuff97

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

thanks :D

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

so do you know what the whole thing is about all together ?

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

It is about trying to help you to identify and reach your goals. ^.^

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

It's basically a plan-- a plan that you can use to follow to help you achieve your future goals.

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

ok @MTALHAHASSAN2 u there

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

where is he?

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

yes I am here

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

sorry I am back

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

thats ok but do u understand the whole concept of this

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

look at the older messages

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

ok let me see

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

ok i do

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

so what you want me to change there

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

change what

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Are those paragraphs looks good

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

and do you want me to change anything

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

one sec @Whitemonsterbunny17 u there

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

to me it sounds good but

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

let @Whitemonsterbunny17 check and see if its good

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

ok

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

can you also help me with 4 and 5

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

I'm here. ^.^

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

Ok he needs help on 4 and 5

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

@Whitemonsterbunny17 ok so rre those paragraphs looks good

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

are

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Your paragraph looks great. ^.^ For #4: Just list some things that you could do in order to help you achieve your goal. For instance, you could say "I will study hard so that I will get good enough grades so that I can attend the college I'd like." or "once I attend the college I need, I will ensure I study hard and get good grades so that I can graduate and start working in my dream career.

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

ok i will do it but how about the #5

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

All number 5 is saying is that now you have made a plan, so follow it. You don't have to write anything for #5. ^.^

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

u got it

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

give a medal to @Whitemonsterbunny17

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

she or he deserves it

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Awe, thank you! I gave you a medal too because you also did a lot to help. ^.^

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

@Whitemonsterbunny17 are you sure about #5

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

thx :D

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

yeah i think its right

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

it says to take action

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

can you please take a look at my grammar and spelling

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Also, yes, I am sure about #5. If you look at the title above it, it says to implement the plan, which means to put that into effect. It's telling you to follow your plan so that you can reach your goal. But it also says that if you encounter a problem, you can change/revise your plan to better suit the situation(s) at hand when the time comes.

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

I can look at your spelling and grammar.

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

can i go or do u still need me?

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

ok so i can leave #5 without saying anything

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

need me still?

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

@safyousuff97 you can go if you wanna go because she is helping so

OpenStudy (safyousuff97):

ok bye

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

I've corrected the mistakes in green below: My future plan is to get into a University for Computer Science\(\bf\color{lime}{.}\) \(\bf\color{lime}{M}\)y choice is York University, \(\bf\color{lime}{which}\) requires more than a 70% \(\bf\color{lime}{grade~point~average}\) to get in. The first way to accomplish this goal is to get higher \(\bf\color{lime}{grades}\) in \(\bf\color{lime}{all~of~my~courses,}\) so that I can easily apply for York University. The second way to accomplish my goal is to really work hard \(\bf\color{lime}{toward}\) achieving it. I believe that I am not very far \(\bf\color{lime}{from~having~good~enough~grades,}\) but the main thing is to maintain \(\bf\color{lime}{them}\). I think I am not \(\bf\color{lime}{too}\) far from my objectives but still need to work on my weaknesses because sometimes weakness \(\bf\color{lime}{are}\) what \(\bf\color{lime}{may~cause}\) trouble. I believe that right \(\bf\color{lime}{now}\) I am at a stage where the things might go right and may even go wrong. I have to keep focus on my plan and try to achieve my goals because \(\bf\color{lime}{of~how}\) it would affect my future. There are so many things in life that \(\bf\color{lime}{can}\) suddenly happen which may also affect our future plan\(\bf\color{lime}{s}\) as well\(\bf\color{lime}{,}\) so that\(\bf\color{lime}{'s}\) why we have to care about those things such as the example \(\bf\color{lime}{of}\) if I \(\bf\color{lime}{completed}\) a test at the end of the last semester and \(\bf\color{lime}{if~I~failed~the~test,~my~grades~would~be~very~negatively~affected.}\)

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Do you have any questions as to why I corrected some of those the way I did?

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

@Whitemonsterbunny17 can you also look at my #4 Throughout the process, I believe I need positive action toward my plan because if I took any wrong decision that properly is going to affect my future. The positive actions which I have to take is that I really have to study hard so that I will get good enough grades for apply into University. But the thing not end there after that when I attend the University I still have to study hard to get good grades so that I can graduate and start working in my dream career.

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

@Whitemonsterbunny17 but are my paragraphs matching with the planning process

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Your paragraphs are matching the planning process. ^.^ There are just a few grammar issues here and there. :p

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

So you don't want me to write anything for #5

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Throughout the process, I believe I need \(\bf\color{lime}{to~take}\) positive action toward my plan because if I \(\bf\color{lime}{make}\) any wrong decision\(\bf\color{lime}{,}\) \(\bf\color{lime}{it~may~affect~my~future~negatively}\). The positive actions \(\bf\color{lime}{that}\) I have to take \(\bf\color{lime}{are}\) that I really have to study hard so that I will get good enough grades \(\bf\color{lime}{to~be~able~to}\) apply into University. \(\bf\color{lime}{That's~not~all,~though,~because~after~I}\) attend the University\(\bf\color{lime}{,}\) I still have to study hard to get good grades so that I can graduate and start working in my dream career.

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Also, no, for #5 it just tells you to follow your plan every day so that you can achieve your goal.

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

oh yeah know i remember that for #5 my teacher want me to give a prediction about the result like how is it goona be like but at this stage we can't find the exact result right So my teacher just want prediction about the result i guess so

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Oh, so do you think you will need to revise your plan in the future?

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

what you mean??

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Do you think you will need to make any changes to your plan in the future?

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

yeah I have to if that plan not work

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

finally then i have to make a change

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

do you know what i mean

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

I'm not sure what you mean.

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

for #5 don't they want us to evaluate reult

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

so basically i wrote this: I am not able to tell results so early because it is not possible and also there is still a lot to do but I can do is that I can give you my predict like how I want result to be like. So hopefully I looking for a good result but if I really work for it.

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

@Whitemonsterbunny17 right??

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Idk if you still understand it or not

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Oh, that makes more sense now. ^.^ That sounds good, but we'll have to fix the grammar on some of it. :3

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

ok go a head

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

i know its hard to understand that's why i am taking you help here

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Thnx a lot for helping

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

let me know when you correct the grammar

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Sorry my responses have been delayed. I will work on fixing the grammar now.

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

I am not able to \(\bf\color{lime}{estimate~the}\) results so early because it is not possible\(\bf\color{lime}{,}\) and \(\bf\color{lime}{also~because}\) there is still a lot to do\(\bf\color{lime}{.}\)\(\bf\color{lime}{~However,~what~I~can~do~is~give~a~prediction~of~how~I~want~my~future~}\)\(\bf\color{lime}{results~to~be.}\) So hopefully I \(\bf\color{lime}{will~get~a~good~result}\) if I really work for it.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Everything looks good so far! @Whitemonsterbunny17 Good work! :D

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Thank you! @iMariella

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