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OpenStudy (anonymous):

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whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

\(\Large\bf\color{blueviolet}{Hi!}\) \(\Large\bf\color{magenta}{Welcome~to~OpenStudy!}\) How can I help you? ^.^

OpenStudy (anonymous):

did u read bewoulf before or heard of it .. if u didn't read or heard can u help me search on google

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

I have not read the story, but I can try to help you find some information on it.

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

What do you need to know about the story?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i have to write an argument essay . i believe that beowulf is a great epic hero .. but why others believe beowoulf is a bad leader >>

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Okay, so first, gather together a list of reasons why you believe that beowulf is a great epic hero. You can type them here so that we can start to work on a draft for your argumentative essay.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

can u help me i suck:( plez

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Awe, you don't suck, you're just a bit confused, which is perfectly okay. ^.^ Take a look at this summary of the story here: http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/beowulf/summary.html Read over it a little bit and tell me if you see any heroic acts done by Beowulf.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

do u know can u help gather info

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Well, from the information from that site, I've gathered a few reasons already. The first one I found was the heroic act of Beowulf's determination to defeat Grendel. Take a look through the second paragraph and tell me if you find any courageous/heroic acts. (:

OpenStudy (anonymous):

like i need help start writing plez i don't what to write

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

We can't write until we know what to write about. I'm trying to help you to gather some ideas for what to write. :p

OpenStudy (anonymous):

so what are they

OpenStudy (anonymous):

its due tomorrow:*

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Well, one idea/point would be Beowulf's determination to defeat Grendel. And don't worry, we'll get this done before tomorrow, I just need you to help, as I cannot do the assessment for you. :p

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

So please do take some time to read over the summary, as I feel it will really help you to come up with some ideas for your writing. (:

OpenStudy (anonymous):

okay the thing is i don't know the ideas . i need to write an argumative paragraph

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

I know you don't know the ideas, which is why I gave you the link to help you to come up with ideas. We can start writing the argumentative paragraph once we have some ideas for it. The reasoning for this is: You cannot write if you have no information gathered to inspire the writing. If there is no information, there is nothing to write about. So, I am trying to help you to find some information so that you can start writing, does that make sense?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

yh:(

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i have A HEADACHE "(:((

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

This may also help: \(\bf\color{blueviolet}{Outline~of~an~Argumentative~Writing:}\) \(\bf\color{blueviolet}{Thesis~statement}\) \(\bf\color{magenta}{Support~of~reasoning~why~Beowulf~is~an~epic~hero~1}\) \(\bf\color{red}{What~others~may~contradict~of~this~reason~1}\) \(\bf\color{lime}{Why~your~point~proves~others~wrong~1}\) \(\bf\color{Gold}{Second~support}\) \(\bf\color{cyan}{Second~contradiction}\) \(\bf\color{orange}{Second~evidence~proving~contradiction~wrong}\) \(\bf\color{blueviolet}{Concluding~statement}\)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

HELP ME FILL IT ..

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

I am trying, you just have to work with me, okay?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

SURE Okay what should i write .. why do there believe beowulf is a bad leader ...

OpenStudy (anonymous):

y do others believe sry

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Well, our subject/thesis is why Beowulf is an epic hero, right?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

yh but i have to write a arumagumative paraph . like why others believe beowulf is abad leader . i believe that he is a good leader but y other think he is bad . i need evidence y others think he is bad plezzzzzz

OpenStudy (anonymous):

that the only think i need help with

OpenStudy (anonymous):

its the only thing i need help with:(

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Well, actually, an argumentative paragraph is a paragraph of you defending your point of view. For example, if I say that "Summer is better than winter", my essay could be: I believe that summer is better than winter for many reasons. One reason, is because in summer, all the beautiful flowers fill the land with a spectacular variety of color. However, others may argue that winter's snowflakes are more beautiful than summer's flowers.

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

But for a typical argumentative essay, you will need 3 supports/reasons that benefit your thesis and also 3 supports/reasons of why others may disagree.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

ok what should i write that he is a bad leader

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Well, think about his personality. It said that he was overconfident and boastful. This could be considered as a negative trait, and a reason of why he is a bad leader.

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Think about why, though. Why would someone who is boastful or overconfident be a bad leader? How would that personality affect the others?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

:(

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

No, no. Don't frown. Just try to think about it, okay?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

do u know

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

I do know, but I'm not here to do your essay for you, I am here to help you to be able to write it yourself.

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

That is why I am asking for your interaction.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

comme on . i hope u feel me i have huge headache i swear … ugh

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

I understand that you have a headache, and I'm terribly sorry that you do, as I know how it feels. :/ However, it is against OpenStudy's Code of Conduct to do this work completely for you, so I need you to work with me on this. I promise that if you do work with me on this, you will understand it more, and you will be able to finish this essay and get a good grade on it. I want to help you, but I also can't break the rules, okay?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

plezzzz

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

I am helping you to the best that I can. You need to work with me on this. Please, just try, okay?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

nevermind :(

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Don't give up, we can do this. ^.^

OpenStudy (anonymous):

plezzzz ugh

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

I will try to make this as easy as possible, okay?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

k

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

Okay, so the second support is in the second paragraph, near the bottom. Can you find it? http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/beowulf/summary.html

whitemonsterbunny17 (whitemonsterbunny17):

I hope that, when you come back, the link I have provided does help you. If it does not, then don't hesitate to send me a message, and I will try my best to help you further. \(\large\bf\color{blueviolet}{I~hope~you~have~a~wonderful~rest~of~the~day,}\) \(\large\bf\color{blueviolet}{And~I~wish~you~the~best~of~luck~with~your~future~studies!}\) \(\Large\bf\color{blueviolet}{\heartsuit~}\hspace{-13.9pt}\color{cornflowerblue}{\heartsuit}\color{magenta}{~Thanks~for~using}\color{cornflowerblue}{~Open}\color{lightgreen}{Study!~}\color{blueviolet}{\heartsuit}\hspace{-11.8pt}\color{cornflowerblue}{\heartsuit}\)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

hllo

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i am sick

OpenStudy (anonymous):

hllo

OpenStudy (anonymous):

hlo

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