Question

I wrote a narrative for my English class about "The Pomegranate Seeds" sorta like a prequel, can someone look at it and peer edit my work so can make my final draft amazing XD lol I WILL FAN AND MEDAL!

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@call.me.sam19

Answer 2

@Tyler..L

Answer 3

Link

Answer 4

ok im here

Answer 5

ok lemme attach the file

Answer 6

i did the same thing ure doing

Answer 7

really? @Brooklyn_Boiii are you on FLVS?

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im way to lazy to read it lmao

Answer 9

i just finished the first segment

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im reading it but how would I edit it

Answer 11

download it if you have microsoft word, u can edit

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srry im to lazy of an retrice

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:P idk what retrice is but lol

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i read your story its really great.who was your teacher

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Hannah Hodges

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oh okay.well i think you'll get a great grade

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thats not the final draft though, i was hoping someone would want to add something else to it

Answer 18

i would but i dont wanna mess it up

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nah you wouldnt i have another copy saved

Answer 20

oh ok

Answer 21

im not gonna add anything it seems like there is nothing missing.but i did correct a few things

Answer 22

can i see? lol

Answer 23

just a few grammatical errors

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Thank you so much! :)

Answer 25

no problem