Question

Can someone revise my work for mistakes PLEASE?

Answer 1

Trevor has invited Samantha to go to the ice cream shop. Create at least four lines of effective dialogue between them that are punctuated and capitalized correctly, and include taglines.

Answer 2

Trevor was shocked, He never thought she would have said yes. "Wow, Great! would you like to go now?" asked Trevor.

"Sure" said Samantha, "now would be a good time, since i have to go to work later." Trevor and Samantha walk to the ice cream shop amased, Samantha said: "Impressive!:.

"What is impressive?" asked trevor.

"So many flavors, and OH MY! ive never seen so many!" said samantha, Amased she chose 5 scoops of ice cream and thanked Trevor for the invitation, "Thank you trevor you are so kind!"

Trevor blushed and said: "no problem Samantha, would you like to come with me another day?"

"sure" said samantha, and they walked off to the beach.

Answer 3

"Wow, Great! would you like to go now?" asked Trevor
"Wow, Great! would you like to go now?", asked Trevor
I believe there was a comma needed there. What do you think?

Answer 4

yeah maybe... i think so... yeah.

Answer 5

Seems like you did that quite often just saying :D
Ill check around for more :D
You know the best way to grammar check? Take your work and put it into a word document!

Answer 6

yeah. Thanks!

Answer 7

Np hun!

Answer 8

Same sentence:
"Wow, Great! would you like to go now?"
The exclamation mark also serves to end the sentence. So I would capitalize the following sentence, such as:
"Wow, Great! Would you like to go now?"