Question

EASY HELP ENGLISH, CHECK MY PARAGRAPH


In this lesson, we have focused on using strong and interesting word choices, combining short phrases to achieve complex sentences, and using subordinate conjunctions and absolute phrases. Use these tools to help you write a descriptive paragraph of three to five sentences for the following situation. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Learning something new (10 points)

Answer 1

Taylor took out her brand new, blank warm up paper ready to learn about this week's new topic for her algebra class. She slowly looks up and see's something terrible that she does not want to read. The heat running down the back of her shirt, the sweat building up at her hairlines, and the discouraging moans of other students Taylor begins to hear. She reads on the board in big, red, capital letters, Fractions. Her worst fear has come true.

Answer 2

this need to be in the English section.

Answer 3

is that a good descriptive paragraph