Question

EASY HELP, QUESTION IS DONE. PLEASE CHECK

In this lesson, we have focused on using strong and interesting word choices, combining short phrases to achieve complex sentences, and using subordinate conjunctions and absolute phrases. Use these tools to help you write a descriptive paragraph of three to five sentences for the following situation. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Learning something new (10 points)

Answer 1

Taylor took out her brand new, blank warm up paper ready to learn about this week's new topic for her algebra class. She slowly looks up and see's something terrible that she does not want to read. The heat running down the back of her shirt, the sweat building up at her hairlines, and the discouraging moans of other students Taylor begins to hear. She reads on the board in big, red, capital letters, Fractions. Her worst fear has come true.

Answer 2

is this a good descriptive paragraph

Answer 3

@Deadly_Roses

Answer 4

it seems like a good paragraph to me...

Answer 5

okay, i fixed some spelling errors

Answer 6

i think when you say brand new blank warm up sheet. it should go: brand new, blank, warm up sheet

Answer 7

paper*

Answer 8

it should have a comma after blank also