Does this sentence look good : This shows how Louie utilizes his intelligence by coming up with a brilliant idea and not losing the potential to survive.

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wintersuntime · Answer

@Angiedoesschool2275

angiedoesschool2275 · Answer

Yes, it is very formal. But try to add more, maybe about 3 more sentences at least to make it a paragraph :)

wintersuntime · Answer

alright thanks

anonymous · Answer

Yes, it's great if you're using that for a conclusion. Remember to add more of sentences to support and summarize your previous paragraphs.

anonymous · Answer

more sentences*

angiedoesschool2275 · Answer

Well, I am logging off. Goodnight all :)

anonymous · Answer

Goodnight!

wintersuntime · Answer

Goodnight and thanks for the help

angiedoesschool2275 · Answer

No problem :)

wintersuntime · Answer

I will post my paragraph when Im done with it

wintersuntime · Answer

Does anyone have an idea of what should I title this if its talking about how the character uses the characteristic intelligence to survive