Question

Can someone help me correct my paragraph I need to write about a jellyfish

Answer 1

@TheSmartOne Please

Answer 2

Where is the paragraph?

Answer 3

Have you ever heard of jellyfish being made into Carmel candy?
A Local high school student says “we decided to cook the jellyfish into Carmel candy.”
There is a large number of jellyfish but the number keeps increasing due to the fact that a bloom of jellyfish can lay about 40,000 eggs. This effects Ireland Scotland Japan & Other places it effects them because water plans have been shut down due to blooms (groups of jellyfish) Clogging up the filters. An they have also been known to cause unknown damage to oceans ecosystem. This can be solved by A different species of jellyfish called the Bereo jellyfish found its way into the Black Sea. This species eats the Mnemiopsis jellyfish. In summary this is going to show, The different species of jellyfish, a local highschool cooking them into carmel candy & how they clog up the water power plants in other places.

Answer 4

Have you ever heard of a jellyfish being made into a caramel candy? A local high school student says, "We decided to cook the jellyfish into caramel candy". There are a large number of jellyfish in the oceans, but the numbers keep increasing. This is due to the face that a bloom of jellyfish can lay up to 40,000 eggs. This affects the countries of Ireland, Scotland, Japan, and many others. They are affected because water plants have been shut down due to the blooms, groups of jellyfish, occluding the filters. They have also been know to cause damage to many of the oceans' ecosystems. This issue can be resolved by introducing a different species of jellyfish, named the Bereo. This species eats the Mnemiopsis jellyfish causing these issues.

This is my edit on the paragraph. That last sentence makes no sense to me and I'm not sure why it is there.

Answer 5

Oh I get it! This is an introductory paragraph! That last sentence is your thesis. Here...
Within the writing you will learn about the different species of jellyfish, students at a local high school incorporating them into food, and how they interfere with water power plants around the globe.

Answer 6

Yes Thank you