Question

I know its not the right subject but could someone help me correct an introduction paragraph

Answer 1

about what?

Answer 2

Well Heres the paragraph;
Have you ever heard of jellyfish being made into Carmel candy?
A Local high school student says “we decided to cook the jellyfish into Carmel candy.”
There is a large number of jellyfish but the number keeps increasing due to the fact that a bloom of jellyfish can lay about 40,000 eggs. This effects Ireland Scotland Japan & Other places it effects them because water plans have been shut down due to blooms (groups of jellyfish) Clogging up the filters. An they have also been known to cause unknown damage to oceans ecosystem. This can be solved by A different species of jellyfish called the Bereo jellyfish found its way into the Black Sea. This species eats the Mnemiopsis jellyfish. In summary this is going to show, The different species of jellyfish, a local highschool cooking them into carmel candy & how they clog up the water power plants in other places.

But I need to make it better because my teacher thinks I copy and pasted it from the lesson