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OpenStudy (narissa):

i need help writing an argumentative essay

OpenStudy (narissa):

@WildQueen

OpenStudy (anonymous):

im here

OpenStudy (narissa):

k how can i start it

OpenStudy (narissa):

i was going to do it on drinking and driving do u have any other ideas

OpenStudy (anonymous):

ok first you can you can start with ur opinion and how you feel about it the while u do that put some facts in there

OpenStudy (anonymous):

ok first you can you can start with ur opinion and how you feel about it the while u do that put some facts in there

OpenStudy (anonymous):

ok first you can you can start with ur opinion and how you feel about it the while u do that put some facts in there

OpenStudy (anonymous):

ok first you can you can start with ur opinion and how you feel about it the while u do that put some facts in there

OpenStudy (narissa):

Drunk Driving falls in the same category as driving on drugs thats what i believe. It affects people in different ways emotionally, mentally, and physically. Some people get emotional on alcohol wwhile, others get vciolent. My Grandpa was arguing with my grandma in 1985 went driving in a vehicle because he was upset and started drinking alcohol. He picked up 2 of his siblings ands ended up flipping over a cliff killing all three of them. My mother lost her dad when she was five years old. Being upset and then consuming alcohol impacted his ability to drive and or think properly.

OpenStudy (narissa):

@WildQueen how is this sooo far? I have to rearrange rthings I know that

OpenStudy (anonymous):

That is good so far but add some more facts into it so u can get ur point across and people will understand you more and put the part with ur grandfather in the middle of your essay

OpenStudy (narissa):

Also I don't agree with the laws about drinking and driving the first time someone is stopped being under the influence of any amount of alcohol should loose their license forever. I also believe they should be charged with attempted murder as they are knowingly going out to drive with alcohol in their system knowingly they can kill someone at anytime

OpenStudy (anonymous):

good good

OpenStudy (narissa):

can u show me step by step please what is the first paragraph should be about?

OpenStudy (narissa):

after that i will close this question and open a new one so i can keep medaling you

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Awww so sweet....well the first paragraph should be this "Drunk Driving falls in the same category as driving on drugs thats what i believe. It affects people in different ways emotionally, mentally, and physically. Some people get emotional on alcohol wwhile, others get violent." then u add this to it "Also I don't agree with the laws about drinking and driving the first time someone is stopped being under the influence of any amount of alcohol should loose their license forever. I also believe they should be charged with attempted murder as they are knowingly going out to drive with alcohol in their system knowingly they can kill someone at anytime."

OpenStudy (anonymous):

then in the middle add what happen with ur grandfather

OpenStudy (anonymous):

and how that effect ur mother

OpenStudy (narissa):

ok i wrote that all down im going to close this and open a new one when im all done im going to type in all out but i need you to correct al the commas qotations and all that please

OpenStudy (anonymous):

ok got you love

OpenStudy (narissa):

thank u sooo much

OpenStudy (anonymous):

np love ;)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

np love ;)

OpenStudy (narissa):

@seb.cal

OpenStudy (narissa):

im all mixed up where to start

OpenStudy (narissa):

@seb.cal i dont know where to start are u a teacher?

OpenStudy (narissa):

@ChantySquirrel1129**

OpenStudy (anonymous):

u dont know how to start it

OpenStudy (narissa):

noo not really i dont think how i started it sounds right

OpenStudy (anonymous):

oh ok

OpenStudy (narissa):

that other posted said he would give the key pointers but went off

OpenStudy (anonymous):

dang

OpenStudy (anonymous):

dang

OpenStudy (narissa):

@Directrix

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