(1) Those of you who dislike the taste of water do not have to drink Gatorade after exercising. (2) After conducting a study, it has been found that skim milk is actually better than sports drinks. (3) It has all of the protein, vitamins, and sugar you need for your body to recover.

Which of these is the best way to revise sentence 2 to make it a clear and effective sentence?

Question

(1) Those of you who dislike the taste of water do not have to drink Gatorade after exercising. (2) After conducting a study, it has been found that skim milk is actually better than sports drinks. (3) It has all of the protein, vitamins, and sugar you need for your body to recover.

Which of these is the best way to revise sentence 2 to make it a clear and effective sentence?

anonymous · Answer

Researchers have found that skim milk is actually better than sports drinks after conducting a study.
    After conducting a study, researchers have found that skim milk is actually better than sports drinks.
    Skim milk is actually better than sports drinks after conducting a study.
    After conducting a study, skim milk is actually better than sports drinks.

anonymous · Answer

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anonymous · Answer

The second one. After conducting a study, researchers have found that skim milk is actually better than sports drinks.

anonymous · Answer

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