WILL GIVE MEDAL! I need a simile and a metaphor poem. One poem = 2 metaphors OR 2 simile (6 lines)

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anonymous · Answer

hold on.....
Shine

Life is something we all share, 
Just like oxygen, in the air. 
The way we live it, is up to us, 
With a negative or with a plus.

Life is something, we should cherish, 
We never know, when we'll perish. 
Live each and every single day, 
Smell the flowers, stop and play.

Life is something, we've been blessed, 
Choice is yours, choose your quest. 
Follow your passions, and you'll be fine, 
With the right attitude, you will shine.

anonymous · Answer

did I do it right?