Question

help@saucvi

Answer 1

So what it looks likes so far-----"Should police officers be subject to wear body cameras?" Police should be subject to wear body cameras as there are to many incidents where violent police interactions have tookn place and the public cannot proove it. Ibelieve Police should be forced to wear body cameras for the public's sasfety.

Answer 2

is that good or no?

Answer 3

then i need to list pros and cons and give explaination for each?

Answer 4

That is good. There are some mistake like you should not use "I" but we will revise any grammatical mistakes later. & no it will not be as simple as listing a list of pros and cons. You do have 1 of the 2/3 supporting details though. This is the "There are many incidents where we could not prove whether the police officer was guilty or not." (revised it a bit.. I would also not use "too" in this statement because it shows some opinion). Now that you have your first supporting statement, find some articles so you can have supporting details. If you want to go above and beyond, try inserting literary devices, and citations. Once you have gathered this information, put into a paragraph. We will use this as your first body paragraph. (we'll revise it all in the end). What you have written already will be used as a fraction of the introduction paragraph. We will do the introduction paragraph later though because coming up with a hook can be tough.