Question

Can someone please look at my grammar or spelling??

Answer 1

Walmart’s SWOT
Strengths:
o # 1 retailer worldwide. Wal-Mart has been one of the largest retailers in the world.
o Wide range of products. Wal-Mart offer wider range of products than any other retailer. It sells grocery, entertainment, health and wellness, apparel and home related products among many other categories and offers both branded and own label goods. Wide range of products attracts more customers to Walmart stores.
o Cost leadership strategy. This strategy has helped Walmart to become the low cost leader in the retail market. It sells products at much lower prices than competitors do, builds warehouse style superstores that contain extensive range of products but doesn’t offer much additional benefits or services. All of this result in cost reductions and lower prices for consumers.
o International operations in 27 countries. Wal-Mart does not rely on sales from US stores only as its competitors do. It has earned $135 billion in sales in 2013 from its international operations, which grew at a much faster rate than sales in the home market.
Weaknesses:
 Labor related lawsuits. Walmart faces labor related lawsuits every year, which costs millions of dollars for the company. It is criticized for poor work conditions, low wages, unpaid overtime work and female discrimination. In addition to litigation costs, corporate’s reputation has been damaged and fewer skilled workers are willing to work for it.
 High employee turnover. The business suffers from high employee turnover that increases firm’s costs, as it has to train new employees more often. The main reason for high employee turnover is low skilled, poorly paid jobs.
 Little differentiation. Walmart has no differentiation compared to its competitors, which might hurt the company in the future if commodity prices or average consumer income would increase. In this case, low cost leadership strategy wouldn’t be as effective as it currently is and Walmart’s main competitive advantage would erode.
 Negative publicity. The company is often criticized for its questionable practices such as bribery of authorities or poor work conditions. Negative publicity damages corporate are reputation.
Opportunities:
• Retail market growth in emerging markets. Retail markets grew by at least 5% on average in emerging markets in the last year, opening huge opportunities for Wal-Mart’s revenue growth. Wal-Mart also has to increase its presence in these markets to sustain future growth.
• Organic Products: The growing demand for healthy and organic food options opened a new avenue for Walmart to explore and grow their presence
• Online shopping growth: Walmart offers a sophisticated online store which provides the shoppers the convince of shopping from the comfort of their homes.

Threats:

 As a global retailer, Walmart is exposed to political problems in the countries and regions where it is currently operational.
 Small Businesses vs. Walmart: Many small businesses in small communities dislike Walmart as they see it as a threat.
 Rising commodity product prices.
 Increasing resistance from local communities.
 Increase in competition with online stores like Amazon.

Answer 2

Grammar is good, there's only two mistakes with putting something as plural, the word offer in the first paragraph should be offers. Also the word results in the 2nd paragraph. Other than that it looks good

Answer 3

but instead of that everything looks fine thou

Answer 4

Yep, looks good

Answer 5

are you sure na??

Answer 6

Yup

Answer 7

Wait, last paragraph convince needs to be switched to convenience

Answer 8

ok but which one is the 2nd paragraph

Answer 9

3rd bullet point