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@seb.cal

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he offline

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i know thank by the way u are friend with him

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yes

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what grade are u in

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u there

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@josedavid Yo! I'm here :) What's up?

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what u got in 2.09 and thank u so much for 1.05 i got a 100

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@seb.cal if u have a good grade can u send it to me like a example please thank u so much . if u dont have a good grade still can u send it to me

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Hey, don't worry, I got an 80% on the assignment, but I'll attach the paper below :)

My teacher's feedback (so you don't get an 80%):

A few of your sentences are actually phrases or incomplete, so be sure to make these solid sentences. Also, I don't see a specified "other" country in your thesis. You'll want to be sure to include that. Here is a possible idea:

In the novel, ______, the author addresses the human rights issue of ______ and this problem is an issue in the US and in _________(write the other country name).

Mention me if you need any more help ;)

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what is the teacger is asking u

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u are online yay

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To be more specific in the thesis, that's it :) Everything else was good.
so basically, I would fill out (based on her feedback): In the novel, ___"Of Mice and Men___," the author addresses the human rights issue of ___mental illnesses___ and this problem is an issue in the US and in (write the other country name here).

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Yeah, I've had one heck of a busy day... >.< and I've still got more stuff to do

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what class

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English 2 in FLVS :)

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are u busy with that.

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Well, I basically have to write my whole essay... So, yeah. Kind of :P

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It'll take like 30 minutes though... so no biggy

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cool if i need help can i tag u

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can i put this in the thesis
In the novel, ___"Of Mice and Men___," the author addresses the human rights issue of ___mental illnesses___ and this problem is an issue in the US and in (Colombia)

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this is what u put what do i do with this
John Steinbeck's novel, “Of Mice and Men,” illustrates the real-life problem of people with mental disabilities and how they struggle to get the proper help they need in order to “make it” in society.

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Deal, I'll reply as soon as i can :) I'll be offline for the next hour or so, so I'll get back to you when I get back on :)

Hmm, well, look at the three links that I used for my sources in the paper I sent you and choose a place that is specifically mentioned in one of those articles (I don't think Colombia was one of them).

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That's the thesis for the opening paragraph of your essay.

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ummm what coutry u pick

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idk... That's what i gotta look through today.. I'll let you know when I'm done. I gtg tho, so i'll message you back l8r :D

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okay
can i have your pass and user name so i dont tag u alot. and when u are not online who im going to get help

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I'll be back on soon tho, i don't mind if u mention me a lot :P

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thank u

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do u think u going to finish segment 1next week

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do i delete this
John Steinbeck's novel, “Of Mice and Men,” illustrates the real-life problem of people with mental disabilities and how they struggle to get the proper help they need in order to “make it” in society.
and put on the thesis this
In the novel, ___"Of Mice and Men___," the author addresses the human rights issue of ___mental illnesses___ and this problem is an issue in the US and in (Colombia)

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Next week I have Thanksgiving break, I'm not doing any school. Yes about the thesis, but CHANGE THE WORDING. And delete the"___" marks. Just throwing this out there: I'm not going to write your essay for you, I've given you the first paragraph (CHANGE THE WORDING) and the sources... From there, you should be able to research and do it yourself :)

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waite what u mean essay

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the brige u mean

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@seb.cal

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u going to help me in this one
02.11 The Outline
2.12 The First Draft

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You have to write an essay about a human rights issue talked about in the novel you read. That's why there is a thesis and sources... You need those in order to write your essay.

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No, I can't help you on those two. You'll have to do those yourself. I can't help you on those because that would require me to write TWO essays instead of just one. I'm not doing that.

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Use the thesis statement (and first paragraph) that I gave you along with the 3 sources to write the essay.

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waite im doing the introduction know

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im doing the hook the bridge and the thesis

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No. I gave you the introduction to use for your essay. Look in the lessons and read the instructions.

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I already gave you the hook, bridge, and thesis, all you have to do is REWRITE THEM in your own words.

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okay

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All you have next is the two body paragraphs and the conclusion. That's it :)

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that is for 02.11 The Outline

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did u do 2.011

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i just want a example please

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@se

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@seb.cal

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What's up?

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can u help me in 2.011

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@seb.cal

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I haven't done 02.11, and no, you have to do that yourself (because that is the outline for what you will write in your essay, and I'm not writing your essay for you). I've given you the resources and started you off very well, so now it's your turn to figure it out.

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i just want a example please

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Dude, go on the lesson and look at the example they give you.

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dud im a girl im using my brother account

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And, how am I supposed to know that? Go look at the example provided in the lesson. I'm not writing your essay for you. OK? And NO. I won't show you an example because you're just gonna copy it into your own essay. WRITE IT YOURSELF. STOP TRYING TO GET ME TO DO IT FOR YOU.

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okay thanks by the way