Question

Can someone please give me a peer review on this research essay?

Answer 1

I will

Answer 2

To submit my assignment to my teacher I need a peer review. I need comments of each of the following areas:

1. Ideas: Is the argument logical? Make sure especially that the argument makes sense to you and that the supporting evidence is sufficient and logical.

2. Organization: Does the organization make sense? Make sure the organization of the essay as a whole and each individual paragraph flows and makes sense to you.

3. Sentence Fluency: Are the sentences interesting to read, and do they flow smoothly? Are the sentences varied in structure and length?

4. Conventions: What errors do you see? Be specific.

Answer 3

@TheSmartOne

Answer 4

@Loser66

Answer 5

@pooja195

Answer 6

@Nnesha

Answer 7

@Nnesha ?

Answer 8

@Whitemonsterbunny17

Answer 9

would it be possible to put the file for your essay on something other then office? i dont have that program

Answer 10

Would rtf. file be okay?

Answer 11

it might , can you try it?

Answer 12

OK, just a moment...

Answer 13

Ok, here it is

Answer 14

@MysticFury

Answer 15

@MysticFury

Answer 16

reading it now

Answer 17

wow great essay paper! everything seems to be good from what i cant tell, and i actually just had to do a paper like this a few days ago! lol , only thing i noticed is some of your paragraphs arent 5 sentences long, idk about your teacher but mine was big on your paragraphs having to be 5 sentences long

Answer 18

Thanks!