Question

Can someone please look at my essay?

Answer 1

Life of Pi was an amazing movie and novel. However, the novel and the film had both similarities and differences. For example one of the new characters by the name of Anandi is added to represent Pi's love whereas in the novel, the character is non-existent. There are so many changes in the movie based on the novel that the director has made, although both versions cover the struggle of Pi.
The Opening of the novel and the movie are totally difference. In the book version, Life of Pi opens with the author's note. He writes, “This book was born as I was hungry. Let me explain. In the spring of 1996, my second book, a novel, came out in Canada” (Martel, author’s note) although, in the movie version, it opens with a zoo where the main character, Pi grew up. Then it is changed to adult Pi in Canada who is telling the story to the writer of the book. He tells the writer, “This is a story that will make you believe in God.”(Life of Pi movie)
Pi’s Education totally describe differently in both version such as in the Book version, Pi starts with the line “My suffering left me sad and gloomy” (Martel 1). Then he talks about his Bachelor’s studies in Toronto. He says, “I attended the University of Toronto and took a double-major Bachelor's degree. My majors were religious studies and zoology” (Martel 1). Whereas in the Movie Version, Pi is in school trying to avoid his classmate calling “Pissing” since his name is Piscine.

Pi’s relationship with Richard Parker varies between book and the movie. In the movie, Pi never manages to tame Richard Parker; he tries to train him using the sound of his whistle and scream at him. In one scene, Pi tries to kill Richard Parker but he could not do it. “Richard Parker is extremely aggressive” (The 32 Differences Between 'Life of Pi': Book and Movie).
In the book, Pi manages to dominate Richard Parker through several training exercises. The tiger makes the sound prusten which expresses harmless intention.

In the book and the movie, Pi admits that without Richard Parker, he would not have survived. Richard Parker keeps Pi busy. Pi says, “I had to tame him. It was at that moment that I realized this necessity. It was not a question of him or me, but of him and me"(Martel 57)
In Conclusion, the novel and the movie are very similar and also they are very contrast as well. However, there are some changes that the director has made to make the story little bit more interesting for the viewers but although both are describing the Pi’s Journey.

Answer 2

@Astrophysics

Answer 3

@Agl202

Answer 4

Try to stay away from words like "totally" as here ` The Opening of the novel and the movie are totally difference.` maybe try entirely

Answer 5

entirely different

Answer 6

ok

Answer 7

There's a few more grammar mistakes, I think if you're on word reread it and use synonyms by right clicking on the word. Also, I'm not sure how you're citing these things, apa, mla, not sure.

Answer 8

@Astrophysics but Is it a good essay thou?

Answer 9

@bia_gonzalex

Answer 10

Overall, in my opinion, well written. What do you think @campbell_st @TheSmartOne @girlmeetsworld @LadyGinger ?

Answer 11

It needs to be much more formal, also there are many grammar mistakes present. You often miss commas (that was one of the mistakes I picked up)