tell me what you think i wrout it myself

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0eJ0fZnZang

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tell me what you think i wrout it myself

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0eJ0fZnZang

anonymous · Answer

@AlexandervonHumboldt2 @dan815 @pooja195 @Preetha @sleepyjess

anonymous · Answer

Its really good! I would just maybe invest in some singing lessons. Your really good, but a bit shaky. Your very good! :)

anonymous · Answer

first off it is really brave of you to sing and post it online. The song is repetitive, the words don't fit in the beat, you add words in at the end of a musical phrase that make it weird, and your voice is really breathy. i know someone who is really great at teaching you should try taking lessons from her. https://www.thumbtack.com/id/boise/music-lessons/voice-lessons there is a link to her page. hope this helps! sorry if i was rude, but the best advice hurts.

anonymous · Answer

@SierraImpala67 @LadyGinger that was my five year old sister so... And the song was my'n and it was about my best friends parents and so lets see you write a song and be good at singing it.