Question

I need help with the story "The Pomegranate Seeds" for English 2

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@Brooklyn_Boiii have you done this by any chance ?

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yea i did that already

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could you help me please ?

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i can what assesment

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yea i can help

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The conflict part

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are you rewriting the strory yet

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What? Conflict
Character
Conflict Experienced
How does this character respond?

Pluto
Proserpina
Ceres

Answer 9

no not yet i'm trying to finish this first

Answer 10

I cant think of the conflict experienced part

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which character

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are we supposed to write about all three or just the character we chose to write about ?

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I chose to write about Pluto but I didn't know if for the conflict part we were supposed to write about one or all three

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just the character u chose to write about

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Then its Pluto

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ok

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well what would I put for the conflict experienced ? once I got that i'm I just don't know what to put ._.

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you would put why he kiddnapped prosperina

Answer 19

So should I put
He took Proserpina because he's lonely and wants someone to make his castle happy and he feels that someone owes him a happy life ?

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@Brooklyn_Boiii

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yes thats exactly right

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Thanks can I write how the character responds and you can tell me if its right ?

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yea go ahead

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that is 1.012

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Pluto responds by trying to make Proserpina forget her mom. He plans to keep her at his castle forever?

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I think I did it wrong .-.

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what assessment is it. i can help u. i did module 1 and i got every work right

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you were right

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English 2 Module 1.09

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Oh so I did get it right :) ?

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yea

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Thanks :)

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np

Answer 34

@josedavid

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i will send u 1.012

Answer 36

Proserpina is frightened. Because she didn’t do what her mother said to her and then she went exploring in the forest. When Proserpina caught sight of the plant she have never seen. She rip the plant and then she was take it to her mother. But she didn’t know that once she ripped the plant from the ground she would be opening a big hole that would lead to Pluto castle. The king was trying to luring her to him but when he saw that she did not collaborate with the king so he kidnapped her. She never thought this type of thing would happen to her. On the way to his castle Pluto told her that you are going to be fine and then he offered her a glass of water from the magical stream. She refused but she knew that Pluto would still try to trick her into drinking the water. So she promised to him that she would eat or drink one bit of anything while she was in Pluto’s custody. After 50 minutes Proserpina saw the big castle for the first time. The castle was the color of element also a gothic type of structure with a big vulture at each corner of the roof. The door had big brass knockers in shape of panda face. If I look past the vultures on the roof I can see the castle has several tower. Also on the sides of the castle there are small little windows will a lot of bars on them that connected all the wat to the grass on the ground. This place had felt of tension and fright. You can tell a lot of people to make the castle seem a lot attractive will a big playground on the side of the palace. No one ever seen playing on it. It was the type pf the pace that made you scaring of your own shadow. When Pluto jump of his horse and when he sent the cook to make of treats that contained some water from the magical stream in it. After everyone is done Pluto escorted Proserpina to her room and then he told her to do what would please her. The girl spend the 2 days locked in her own rom crying a lot. And the third day of being on the castled she was going to explored the castle. When Pluto saw her wandering around. He gave her permission to explore the castle as long as she does not go in to the west. Obviously Proserpina didn’t not care what he said so she goes into the west and find herself inside the dungeon. After 2 minutes she wanted to know why the prisoners were in the dungeon. When was talking to them for hours then she learned that they were there for very foolish reason. When she leaves she talk to one prisoners. Proserpina ask the prisoner why he has been sent to the dungeon “Because I did not wish to follow Pluto’s orders.” She spend 2 hours talking to the prisoner and then he promise her that if she freed all the prisoners, he would lead her bad to her home. Proserpina told the prisoner she has a plant to free you and the other guys and bring Pluto down. Before going with her plant. She told the prisoners the game plant of her idea. Meanwhile Pluto was outside of the dungeon door listening her plan, so he threw Proserpina with the prisoner. So Proserpina finds simple objects like nails to pick the locks and free the prisoners and then they decide to carry out their previous plan. After the fight, Pluto is thrown into own dungeon to rot. The prisoners wanted Proserpina to lead the castle but she refused and left with the man that promise to take her to her home. She finally arrives at home she and her mother reunite. The stranger that took her home has nowhere else to go so the girl invites him to stay in her home. After a while Proserpine’s mother falls in love the stranger and they lived happily ever after

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that is the first draft. u can copy and put it on your own words

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@Adrianna.Gongora

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wow ! thanks :) you're really nice :)

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did you write your narrative planner on prosperina

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np

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did you write your narrative planner on proserpina ?

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what assesment

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the same one

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i think so

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in 1.09 i did it for pluto

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so it means 1.012 i did it for pluto

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oh ok :) thanks again I really appreciate it . let me know if you need help with anything and ill do my best

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u there

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if u copy mine 1.012. i just need help in 1.014

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so it means 1.012 i did it for pluto

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write a post for 01.14 and ill help you with it just give me about five minutes :)

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1.014 is the continued of 1.012