Question

help please
@Adrianna.Gongora

Answer 1

okay :)

Answer 2

u read what i send u the story

Answer 3

nstructions: Copy and paste the following text into a document or create a document that contains the same information.
Using your narrative story first draft, complete the following steps to revise your writing.

Voice

Read your story and identify the voice you are using. In one or two sentences, describe how you want your voice to sound.
Based on your description, identify two ways you can improve your writing to make this voice more clear in your story.

Answer 4

@Adrianna.Gongora

Answer 5

well your being informative. it just wants you to explain how your voice is. kinda like the tone and it wants you to improve your draft but explain how you can :)

Answer 6

I got to go be back soon

Answer 7

do you still need help ? @josedavid

Answer 8

yes

Answer 9

alright im ready :)

Answer 10

what are you stuck on ? or do you have anything so far ?

Answer 11

what assesment u are doing in english2 and i need help in 2 questions in english1

Answer 12

I finished the story i'm having a hard time putting the exposition , rising action, climax, falling action, resolution. and write the two questions

Answer 13

okay what character u put

Answer 14

in 1.09

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pluto

Answer 16

I usually can do this for some reason i'm having a hard time with this one

Answer 17

okay give me a sec

Answer 18

this is my questions
What is the main theme of William Kamkwamba's story? What led you to this conclusion? Briefly explain in two or three sentences. Use proper spelling and grammar.

What is the order of events of Calvin Stanley's story? Briefly explain in two or three sentences. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Answer 19

alright and don't forget two type out your two questions so I can help you.

Answer 20

i wrote it

Answer 21

exposition
Here I will tell u about king Pluto felling’s

Rising Action
The king react by snapping her back to reality and tell the girl not to worry about her old life because I'm not a bad man and i will give you a better life than before and that you will be fine. Pluto is thinking that Proserpina will try to run away from the palace and never return again.

Climax
Pluto goes and lives on his daily routine. But when he left Proserpina started to plot her way of escaping while the king left.

Falling Action
The king is preparing food for Proserpina. But the girl would not eat then the king notice that his dog is barking. So he just tell his dog to quiet down until he hears him whine in the distance. Where he sees ceres enter the door.

Resolution
Ceres yelled at king Pluto and he tell him what you are doing with my princes. King Pluto says he just wanted to feed the girl and he found her on the woods so he brought her to the palace. Ceres tell Proserpina to come to him but the king grabs her before she can go with ceres and with a grin he tries to make a deal with ceres for them to live with him also be his maid, but before he can finish his sentence ceres casts a spell on him and placed the king in death hold of vines. After the spell Pluto then start to worry for his life and reconsider his negotiation and then Pluto tell give here is your daughter then Pluto tell ceres that he does not going to mess with him again. After ceres let him go. Later ceres was crying of joy and relief with his princes. When they leave his palace then Pluto fixed up their sits in their master bed room thinking of other ways to get a new beautiful maid after that they become friends because Pluto was feeling bad because he kidnap the girl of ceres

Answer 22

@Adrianna.Gongora

Answer 23

The theme is, you can do anything if you set your mind to it.

Answer 24

im trying to figure out the second one sorry

Answer 25

why sorry i send u what u need help

Answer 26

The author shows the reader Calvin is blind. People give him descriptions, and his mom tells him what not to touch.
i think that's what the second question want's

Answer 27

okay delited the question my answer was good i got a 100 on it

Answer 28

I need the exposition, rising action, climax, falling action and resolution I can't really figure it out

Answer 29

i just send u it

Answer 30

what do you mean ?

Answer 31

exposition
Here I will tell u about king Pluto felling’s

Rising Action
The king react by snapping her back to reality and tell the girl not to worry about her old life because I'm not a bad man and i will give you a better life than before and that you will be fine. Pluto is thinking that Proserpina will try to run away from the palace and never return again.

Climax
Pluto goes and lives on his daily routine. But when he left Proserpina started to plot her way of escaping while the king left.

Falling Action
The king is preparing food for Proserpina. But the girl would not eat then the king notice that his dog is barking. So he just tell his dog to quiet down until he hears him whine in the distance. Where he sees ceres enter the door.

Resolution
Ceres yelled at king Pluto and he tell him what you are doing with my princes. King Pluto says he just wanted to feed the girl and he found her on the woods so he brought her to the palace. Ceres tell Proserpina to come to him but the king grabs her before she can go with ceres and with a grin he tries to make a deal with ceres for them to live with him also be his maid, but before he can finish his sentence ceres casts a spell on him and placed the king in death hold of vines. After the spell Pluto then start to worry for his life and reconsider his negotiation and then Pluto tell give here is your daughter then Pluto tell ceres that he does not going to mess with him again. After ceres let him go. Later ceres was crying of joy and relief with his princes. When they leave his palace then Pluto fixed up their sits in their master bed room thinking of other ways to get a new beautiful maid after that they become friends because Pluto was feeling bad because he kidnap the girl of ceres

Answer 32

thanks

Answer 33

np

Answer 34

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