There are many views on television. Some people regard it as being a great blessing, whiles others may think of it as being a curse. I believe that television is both a curse and a blessing. //Can someone just read over this and make suggestion to improve or make sure none of the English rules are being broken please

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athecool · Answer

whiles others may think of it as being a curse 
you could change: as a curse

athecool · Answer

and
I believe that television is both a curse and a blessing.
It could be 
To me I believe that television is both a curse and a blessing.

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The rest is good!!

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alana242 · Answer

Is whiles others, agreeing with subject verb agreement rule ?

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@athecool

athecool · Answer

Yeah

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