Question

Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Darius went to the store. He wanted food. He ran into his teacher there. They talked about his latest project. He decided to base his project on gourmet cooking.
I don't want the answer I just need some help ._.

Answer 1

I don't know this lol, I think you just add on to it like...
Darius went to the store. He decided to buy food because he was hungry.
I don't know, I suck xD

Answer 2

Would it be
Darius went to the store, Because he wanted food. He ran into his teacher there and they talked about his latest project. Little by little he decided to base his project on gourmet cooking.

Answer 3

@jabez177 can you help me ?

Answer 4

well ''Because'' should not be capital.

Answer 5

I didn't mean to ._.

Answer 6

What kind of help do you need? Because I know where the comma, because, and the and should go.

Answer 7

well is this right ?
Darius went to the store, Because he wanted food. He ran into his teacher there and they talked about his latest project. Little by little he decided to base his project on gourmet cooking.
I'm supposed to use temporal transitions and the original sentences were, "Darius went to the store. He wanted food. He ran into his teacher there. They talked about his latest project. He decided to base his project on gourmet cooking. "

Answer 8

Yes, that is correct. However I'm a bit uncertain of what Temporal Transitions are. May i ask, what are they?

Answer 9

Little by little, I also used because and, and. I don't think that "because" & "and" are temporal transitions though.

Answer 10

How about "Darius went to the store for some food."

Answer 11

Or "To buy?"

Answer 12

So would it be this ?
Darius went to the store for some food. While he was there he ran into his teacher and they talked about the latest project. Little by little he decided to base his project on gourmet cooking.

Answer 13

@jabez177

Answer 14

Yep! :)

Answer 15

Thank you! :) One more thing, does their need to be any commas ?

Answer 16

@jabez177

Answer 17

"While he was there, he ran into his teacher and they talked about the latest project."

Answer 18

Thank you :)

Answer 19

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