Could someone please revise/edit this one page short story?
It is based on Macbeth, and it is responding to this prompt: Narrate a scene where Macbeth and Lady Macbeth prepare for Banquo’s funeral and tell the story of their interaction.

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Could someone please revise/edit this one page short story? 
It is based on Macbeth, and it is responding to this prompt: Narrate a scene where Macbeth and Lady Macbeth prepare for Banquo’s funeral and tell the story of their interaction.

breyliance · Answer

:D its awesome i wouldn't change any part it goes together and flows nicely :D

anonymous · Answer

Thanks! If anyone else has time please double check! I'm worried about using more than one tense.. I'm not good at sticking to one.