Which of the sentences below is a good illustration of using vivid verbs in our biography?
A. Phil didn't like to lose, so he tried out a second time and was finally a big success.
B. Unable to swallow defeat, Phil jostled for another chance and finagled his way to the top.
C. Phil was not a good loser, which ended up being a big advantage because he finally had success.

Question

Which of the sentences below is a good illustration of using vivid verbs in our biography?
A.  Phil didn't like to lose, so he tried out a second time and was finally a big success.
B.  Unable to swallow defeat, Phil jostled for another chance and finagled his way to the top.
C.  Phil was not a good loser, which ended up being a big advantage because he finally had success.

anonymous · Answer

@kxttxn

kxttxn · Answer

Is this still just part of your practice?

anonymous · Answer

yes

anonymous · Answer

i have a exam next week so i have to learn how to do this

anonymous · Answer

I think it's B

anonymous · Answer

Because it uses verbs to great a mental image more than the others

kxttxn · Answer

Sorry I was offline for a bit. @EKKERKING which one appears to be the most descriptive/attention-getting to you?