Question

Can someone "peer edit" my paper. I know it needs way more, but I'm not sure what to add or where to add. I need feedback. link below.

Answer 1

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1S5xqT3H83ZvtFrfX7qLpdX2C6KZ5zGiIJdMag_ce-Vo/edit?usp=sharing

Answer 2

Hi! I can help... will I get a medal?

Answer 3

yes! once done I will be glad to give you one!

Answer 4

Ok... what is this for?

Answer 5

English

Answer 6

Well English Comp 1

Answer 7

Oh, I'm bad at this... do you want me to get you someone who is great at it? :-J

Answer 8

Yes, Please!

Answer 9

Ok... hold on.

Answer 10

thank you!

Answer 11

I can help, what grade i am in 9th grade

Answer 12

I am in college

Answer 13

Ok.........., Sorry

Answer 14

Ok... here I found someone... @sky060902

Answer 15

I can help u if u want

Answer 16

I am in the 8th but I can see what I can do

Answer 17

OOOH! please do!

Answer 18

ok im reading it now

Answer 19

I think you did a wonderful job I don't see anything wrong with your paper it has lot's of big words, and since your in collage that's good, the punctuation is great the wording and the organization of the paraghraphs are perfect and I thought it was very interesting. I hope you get a good grade.

Answer 20

I don't know what you can add because I would need to do reserch, but you should try more or ask more people!!!

Answer 21

Okay. Thank you!

Answer 22

ur welcome