Question

help will medal and fan

Answer 1

Janet’s


If you like baton, you should go to Limited Edition, Extreme Hotshots, etc. But one place you should not go to is Janet’s School of Dance. Janet’s is not even close to good.

Janet’s is a small building, and when you practice you need room. Sure you can go outside, but what about in winter? She uses church benches as couches for her parents, because they are not aloud to leave the building if the children are young. Her classes are thirty minutes long at the most, and she wastes that little time eating and ordering food!


Janet says very rude comments such as “You look like you just came from Detroit” to me when I wore high heels to practice and wore jogging pants because it was winter, and “I should call you wah, wah Abby” because my friend Abby sprained her finger and tried her best on stage but apparently it just wasn’t good enough for Janet, “Girls who dye their hair are disgusting” because one my friend Hailey died her hair pretty blue at the bottom. Janet makes favorites in her classes and makes other people feel bad about themselves.


Janet made a tryout for the teams, and she lied to me and said we would only have to catch three tricks in three tries. Later she added tricks to each individuals tryouts, which was not fair because we all tried out for the same teams. She also lied to my parents and said I made the senior shakers, a pom pom team, but I found out from another parent that I made the junior team, which was not what I tried out for.


Janet’s is not a good studio. She tells us to do tricks, but she cannot do them herself! Janet’s is a start for beginners, but after awhile when you are more advanced you should quit like baton queens did and move on to another baton studio.

Answer 2

tell me if u like it. will medal, whence someone tells me how

Answer 3

will medal if u tell me what u like best

Answer 4

Figured out how to get here, sorry about that.

Answer 5

oh, its ok

Answer 6

do u like it?

Answer 7

I like this paper a lot, but there are a few things that could be improved.

Answer 8

like what?

Answer 9

In the 2nd paragraph where you say such as, there needs to be a comma before the quotation.

Answer 10

thank you
how do u get to change ur profile pic?

Answer 11

and take out to me because that sounds like you are repeating yourself.

Answer 12

kk

Answer 13

how do u change ur prof pic?

Answer 14

you go to your profile and click advanced settings or something like that. anyway in the 2nd paragraph after winter put a period so the sentence isn't so long.

Answer 15

kk

Answer 16

i mean third

Answer 17

and the sentence where you say she tried her best put a period and then use the quote as the start of a new sentence.

Answer 18

where it wasn't good enough for Janet.

Answer 19

kk. ty

Answer 20

what do u like best about it

Answer 21

my favorite part is the second paragraph where you describe the church pews as benches.

Answer 22

Do you want me to help you some more, or are you good?

Answer 23

do u want to be my friend?

Answer 24

Sure

Answer 25

ty! is this ur first day? i dont think so, cause' i saw u before i think

Answer 26

but it is mine

Answer 27

Yes this is my first day. I still haven't figured out how this website works but I am enjoying helping people.

Answer 28

what are medals and owlbucks and how do you make your smartscore increase?

Answer 29

medals are when u get picked for best answer. thats what i did to u
owlbucks idk what they are
ur smartscore increases by helping people.
how did u fan me?

Answer 30

I like your paper and I don't think anything else needs to be changed, but there are some places where you could make your sentences shorter and a few places that need commas, but besides that I think you did great!

Answer 31

kk. thanks!!!

Answer 32

I clicked on your profile and there is an option to fan people

Answer 33

There is also a place where you can leave a review ;-)

Answer 34

what does the little number under my picture mean?

Answer 35

lol

Answer 36

its ur smartscore

Answer 37

oh, well I am glad I could help you, so how do we keep in touch can I add you to a friend list or something?

Answer 38

just go to old messages, the thing on top left, and just talk i guess. wait, what grade r u and do u go to k12?

Answer 39

never mind if you fan someone you keep track of them, gonna go help more people, ta ta :-)

Answer 40

kk. what grade and do u go to k12?

Answer 41

im am 6th grade and go to k12.

Answer 42

I am in 10th grade and I go to epic charter schools

Answer 43

w.
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i am still smart tho, even in sixth grade lolz

Answer 44

wanna help Braxton1738?

Answer 45

on the one below us?

Answer 46

@StudyBuddy17

Answer 47

I love it

Answer 48

ty.

Answer 49

i can fan but not medal, i chose best response. why do you like it?

Answer 50

wanna be my friend? what grade r u?

Answer 51

no problem you deserve it :) and ill fan you bak. I like it because it was very clear and detailed. and sure ill be ur friend im in 11th grade.

Answer 52

6th grade. u r very nice

Answer 53

you know you dont have to put ur email, because for email when i signed up, i just put abbysais.com for my emial. that is not my email or name tho lolz my dad taught me that trick.

Answer 54

lol cool :)