is this good???????
My name is Azima Bradshaw, I would like to nominate Coach Harold Jones from Hanna High school in Anderson, South Carolina for Man of the Year. Coach did a lot to deserve this award : he help radio when is mom (maggie) passed. On christmas he made sure that radio got gifts and had a fun. Coach Jones was there for radio even no people had doubts, coach stay with radio. This is why I think Coach Jones should get the Man of the year award.

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is this good???????
    My name is Azima Bradshaw, I would like to nominate Coach Harold Jones from Hanna High school in Anderson, South Carolina for Man of the Year. Coach did a lot to deserve this award : he help radio when is mom (maggie) passed. On christmas he made sure that radio got gifts and had a fun. Coach Jones was there for radio even no people had doubts, coach stay with radio. This is why I think Coach Jones should get the Man of the year award.

anonymous · Answer

who is radio and i like it

hope210 · Answer

It is good but I wouldn't repeat his name as much. You said who it was for at the beginning     
but other than that I liked it.

fortytherapper · Answer

Yep. Just fix minor mistakes and you're good to go

anonymous · Answer

Make sure to review the paragraph over again.
Read it out loud and you might find your mistakes.