Question

I have never written a song before, but odd enough, my french homework inspired me to. I don't have much written yet but I would appreciate opinions and anything you would like to add, I will give you full credit. Here it is:

Did you see fireworks last night when I was with you?
Did you feel that spark ingniting my heart?
Did you see fireworks last night?

Answer 1

@StudyBuddy17

Answer 2

Did you see the fireworks last night last night when I was with you?
Did you feel that spark igniting in my heart?
Did you see the fireworks last night?

I know there's something' between us, something between us!
I know that nothing' can stop us, nothing can stop us.

Do you believe in dreams coming true?
Do you believe in me and you?
Do you believe in dreams coming true?

I know, i know. we can stop the world if we want.
'Cause i know, i know, this is a wild love hunt!

Answer 3

that's what i got for ur song

Answer 4

u can use it if u want

Answer 5

@souleaterz Not bad...

Answer 6

ty

Answer 7

That's a good start I guess, but I don't know if you can consider something a song unless there's music involved.

Answer 8

thanks you guys this is great!

Answer 9

great awesome song :)

Answer 10

The beginning reminds me of Firework by Katy Perry