Question

Medal + Fan

Identify the errors in the sentence below. Then, rewrite the sentence correctly.

The eagle our nation's bird is majestic, graceful, and hunts stealthily.

Answer 1

I'm not about english, but ill try it out

The Bald Eagle, our nation's bird, is majestic, graceful, and hunts stealthily.

That's probably not right

Answer 2

Oh sorry I didn't realize I was still in math but thank you for trying!

Answer 3

are there any choices ?

Answer 4

No, it's just a worksheet.

Answer 5

alright can you type the answers on the work sheet on here

Answer 6

and is it hard to get questions answered

Answer 7

There isn't any choices.

Answer 8

ok 1 min

Answer 9

are you 7th grade

Answer 10

I'm in 12th.

Answer 11

oh cause i found this link that has questions like this but 7th grade

Answer 12

im not sure one minute

Answer 13

Original sentence: The eagle our nation's bird is majestic, graceful, and hunts stealthily.

Errors:
1) lack of commas around clause '...our nation's bird..."
2) skewed parallelism of adjectives 'is majestic', 'is graceful', 'hunts stealthily'
3) passive tone, i.e. '...is...'

Improved sentence:
Our nation's bird, the eagle, hunts through a majestic meld of both stealth and grace.

Answer 14

im sorry

Answer 15

Why the apology?

Answer 16

i said one minute and fells like 4 minutes reload :(

Answer 17

oh k?

Answer 18

thank u

Answer 19

The eagle, our nation's bird, is majestic, graceful, and hunts stealthy.