Question

Which of the following lines creates a natural pause by using a comma correctly?
"I, uh, am confused. Weren't we leaving at noon?"
"Let's sit over, watch out!" yelled Bianca as the Frisbee passed over Nawal's head."
"Thanks for packing my ham and cheese salad, ew, it's filled with sand!" shrieked Lara.
"I don't know what happened, suddenly the beach umbrella, was gone!" exclaimed Ned.

Answer 1

which one do you think makes the most sense?

Answer 2

A?

Answer 3

@tootzrll

Answer 4

does it sound like something u would say? thats how i do it. "would i say this?"

Answer 5

I would say either A, or C. However, im more inclined to go with answer C, it seems more natural if you were to say it aloud.

Answer 6

@ksmd13

Answer 7

Okay thanks