Can some one check my speech? Will give medal!

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anonymous · Answer

"I Have a Dream" 
By Eva Luca
I wish that Kenya would be a country without poverty, crime or hunger. One day, Kenya will be a wonderful place filled with happiness and joy. A place where there won’t be major problems and everyone lived happily. 
I had a dream that one day Kenya will be an amazing place.
I had a dream that all children and teenagers will have education.
I had a dream that all adults had enough money to provide their family needs.
I had a dream that Kenya would be a country without poverty, crime and hunger.
White people are very rude sometimes it’s a problem. It would be great when all people are treated equally, black and white. Kenya would be wonderful and amazing. I hope that will happen.

ramzy197 · Answer

so far its good but maybe you should check with your teacher or whoever set this for you :)

anonymous · Answer

Thanks.

anonymous · Answer

Gave you a medal. : )

anonymous · Answer

It's a nice speech..but there are some grammatical mistakes like u should say 'everyone lives happily' instead of 'lived'.and another is that in next lines it should be 'have' instead of 'had'....overall it's good... :)

anonymous · Answer

says the person who types U instead of YOU

anonymous · Answer

hmmm...well, the inquirer is wise enough to understand what i have written @monglimoo