Question

what do you think of my song?

Answer 1

The way you are
You're like a star
In the sky
flying so high
my life will never be the same
without your love
in my heart
i thought that we were perfect

You are my all
and if you leave
you will make me fall
down into a pit
that is so deep
I will never escape it
You are my all
and you won't believe
how far I will fall

I am not mad,
and I am not sad
I give you my all
and I will not fall
As long as we're together
I will never fall

Answer 2

We will never fall

Answer 3

What do you think, @Shadrac

Answer 4

its really good so far... Any time i write a song to any one, I always use simile & metaphors... like i would say maybe you are a star instead of like, a star... and the pit i would call it a never ending downward trend or a bottomless pit

Answer 5

also i would say more about whoever it is your speaking of and how they make you feel

Answer 6

thank yu

Answer 7

it is just the beginning

Answer 8

sounds good so far!!!

Answer 9

thank you @shishi990
@Seantheskater helped me a lot

Answer 10

thats good!!!

Answer 11

i have a lot to learn from him.

Answer 12

anyone can give suggestions as well

Answer 13

thats perfect man. keep it up

Answer 14

thank you

Answer 15

Well it doesn't quite make sense but the lyrics are awesome!

Answer 16

Because first you say you will fall then you won't. Like..?

Answer 17

well, my relationship with my gf is really complicated. one week, we are as close as can be, and the next, we barely speak to each other.
@Vickyisthesmartone123

Answer 18

Oh ok I see now...mmhhh:)
Interesting

Answer 19

yeah, so I wanted my song to reflect both sides of our relationship. This is only the beginning anyway.

Answer 20

Well good job!

Answer 21

thank you. i fanned and medaled u. thanks for the feedback!

Answer 22

Welcome

Answer 23

I did too

Answer 24

@SkriLL3xMast3r what's up man I'm here :)

Answer 25

i got suspended. want to create a song by replying with verses?

Answer 26

suspended from openstudy for spamming

Answer 27

@jakyfraze

Answer 28

@souleaterz

Answer 29

@SkriLL3xMast3r yeah I'm here

Answer 30

k.

Answer 31

what u want to do?

Answer 32

@SkriLL3xMast3r what do you mean?

Answer 33

we can create a song by replying to eachothers verses.

Answer 34

I'm really bad at those kind of things :(

Answer 35

@souleaterz

Answer 36

@shishi990 u still there?

Answer 37

yeah im here

Answer 38

@jakyfraze if i can get @souleaterz to reply, we can help you, k?

Answer 39

@foolofatook

Answer 40

am i needed in here?

Answer 41

What do u know about the moderators?

Answer 42

alot y

Answer 43

Whelp, they suspended me from openstudy for an hour, because @souleaterz and @foolofatook and i were making a song. I don't know why they would do that. do you?

Answer 44

yes they can do that

Answer 45

i have no clue

Answer 46

right, but why?

Answer 47

was it inappropriate?

Answer 48

yeah, it was bs. im gonna go find @souleaterz be back in a sec.

Answer 49

ight

Answer 50

no it wasn't inappropriate. it was a song about insanity

Answer 51

ill post it:

Im losing my head!
In fatal darkness.....
Lies the dead!
Im seein' all red!
Its ALL IN MY HEAD!
But the stars aline in a very daring way!
My mind is breaking away from all reality...
I dont know if ill ever see the blue light sky again!
But the end is so near i know it will result in...(music drops in)
INSANITY!!! I
can feel it rushing through my bones!!!!
don't know just where to GO!
Im fallin on my knees!
i dont know what to believe!
(whispery)Im fallin to my death....
dont know what to do.
im fallin all alone! (Heavy metal music)
I NEED TO FIND A HOME!!
Just where i belong!!!
Where i wont be unknown..... T
HEN I WONT HAVE TO BE ALONE!! (solo guitar riff!)
Im going all alone, to my funeral...
there is no goin' back........
im never going back!
TO THE PLACE CALLED INSANITY!!!

Answer 52

ohh wow...

Answer 53

what do u think? it is a song about human infirmity

Answer 54

sounds weird but good at the same time

Answer 55

yeah, it was a collaboration of me, @gokuporter, and @souleaterz

Answer 56

i did every other verse, starting with the first.

Answer 57

cool

Answer 58

i forgot @foolofatook

Answer 59

they are all really cool people.

Answer 60

hello?

Answer 61

@SkriLL3xMast3r yeah?

Answer 62

im still here

Answer 63

do u have any songs that u have written?

Answer 64

hey @jakyfraze see if u can get ahold of @souleaterz and @foolofatook

Answer 65

foolofatook is offline

Answer 66

it shows him as online for me...

Answer 67

he is right at the top of the list of people I have fanned.

Answer 68

@jakyfraze?

Answer 69

@SkriLL3xMast3r oh :/ but on my side it says he is offline. weird lol

Answer 70

huh. Can u get hold of @souleaterz

Answer 71

@souleaterz

Answer 72

still want a song?

Answer 73

sure, why? got some more lyrics in a new question, but in a different genre...

Answer 74

@Vickyisthesmartone123?

Answer 75

@shishi990 I have someone to mix the song i showed you... Just need someone to sing it... Know anybody?

Answer 76

Hello?

Answer 77

um no i dont tbh

Answer 78

ok... Ill keep looking... :p i tried XD

Answer 79

do u want a guy or girl to sing it??

Answer 80

i can but i am singing a duet with @micahm tho this week

Answer 81

But we can still do it

Answer 82

@shishi990 it doesn't matter to me...

Answer 83

alright... @Vickyisthesmartone123 what were you thinking?

Answer 84

HOLD ON IM DOING SCIENCE I CANT THINK RIGHT NOW I HAVE A MILLION THINGS IN MY HEAD SHESH

Answer 85

ok. msg me later....

Answer 86

ohh ok

Answer 87

@Vickyisthesmartone123 i know me to :( Spanish is hard lol

Answer 88

No it's easy!

Answer 89

I said science not spanish

Answer 90

@Vickyisthesmartone123 i know lol. I'm doing Spanish

Answer 91

IT'S EASY THO

Answer 92

:)

Answer 93

@Vickyisthesmartone123 ITS EASY!!! :o please help me, i will give you a medal for each one

Answer 94

K