Question

Will someone review a story I made?

Answer 1

Yea

Answer 2

Or do you want me to comment it

Answer 3

Is the story for a project or something or do you just want it reviewed ( Reading it Now)

Answer 4

Its a great story! @linksonic1

Answer 5

It is for language arts

Answer 6

@iGreenHacked Thank you :D. Is there anything that you would change about it or add?

Answer 7

The only thing i would change is like just adding in what the alien said like in ( ) so the reader can understand the alien without it affecting the story

Answer 8

Okay I will do that now and I made it so that the aliens words are backwords.