Question

Tell me what you think about my poem and be honest.

Under the skin
Darkness within,
Silently creeping
Desperately seeking,
Beating in my heart
Thinking in my brain
Itching with every move made;
Can't fight it,
Must oblige to it.

Answer 1

creepyly cool

Answer 2

Thanks, I wrote it when i got bored while doing my homework.

Answer 3

@AwesomeGurl

Answer 4

i don't think you should've added the word "made in "itching with every move made;"

Answer 5

I think its amazeballs and ya its cool brahhhhhhhhh

Answer 6

GOOD job man

Answer 7

thx

Answer 8

your welcome

Answer 9

Its nice!

Answer 10

@Landon34

Answer 11

Great job @Hope210 !!!!

Answer 12

Thanks

Answer 13

Awesome!