Question

Tell me what you guys think of lyrics to a new song I wrote.

Answer 1

Lonely
There was once a lonely boy
Standing alone on a thin line
Until the day that she came along
And prevented his whole world from changing to hell

She will come and be there for you
You just have to wait my dear friend
So that day will be the best day of your life

When she appears she will approach like wild fire
But she'll be the star in your eyes
So make this one count
For it might be your last

She will come for you
You just have to wait
For the day to say hi
But I promise you won't regret the wait
For she'll be the stars in your eyes
So make this one count my dear friend

There are too many holes in our relationship to reach a new level
But I promise you it'll work out
So please stay with me so we can fix what we broke

She will come for you
You just have to wait
For the day to say hi
But I promise you won't regret the wait
For she'll be the stars in your eyes
So make this one count my dear friend

So when I wake up will you be there for me
Just like a magic trick
You will be gone

Answer 2

GREAT!!

Answer 3

Thanks I am gonna record it tonight then upload a link probably tomorrow.

Answer 4

k... then I can hear ur voice!! I's SO EXCITED

Answer 5

I CANT wait... i think you will perform beautifully

Answer 6

i love it

Answer 7

sounds very great lol omgsh

Answer 8

I like this

Answer 9

Nice.

Answer 10

ooh nice job, cant wait to hear it

Answer 11

idk sounds good but i cant get the rhythm or something down lol

Answer 12

i like them

Answer 13

theyre awesome

Answer 14

nice i am also wrighting a song (:

Answer 15

was It the one you that just apppeared at the top?

Answer 16

yea

Answer 17

its not finished

Answer 18

ah need help with it

Answer 19

yea shure

Answer 20

its good, i know people who can publish it for you

Answer 21

i love it they rock

Answer 22

These lyrics are great! I feel like it would be something SayWeCanFly would sing. Amazing job and it's definitely a tear jerker!