Question

New song, just a sketch of a story between to people, hope ya'll can relate!

Answer 1

I locked myself in my bedroom,
you come to my door baby I need you,
you need me what for,
you didnt need me when you were lovin on the girl next door,
sorry baby that was a mistake,
just a mistake,
yea a mistake,
sorry,
Sorry for what,
sorry for what,
breaking your heart,
baby can I have a fresh start,
please baby please I'm down on my knees,
I love you baby,
your all that I need,

stop I've heard that before,
didnt you say that to the girl next door,
sorry baby you lie through your teeth,
thats why with me you should never cheat,
I'll dig my key into the side of your heart with a 9 pound drive,
you love me,
oh what a pitty did you get that from the amazing P-Ditty,
I love you baby please dont give up on me,
I think you are my destiney,
I love you for real,
I need you to be the for me,
I know what I want,
you,
me,
you,
wow thats so sweet you should have asked before you went to cheat,
I told you I love you I mean it I do,
please be my baby I'll be good for you,
I'll be good to you,
I'll never cheat again,
you wont?
No I found what I want,
I'll catch that grenade,
I'll even be your slave,
baby please my heads on the blade,
I will be your serenade,
I love you,
I mean it,
you are my pheonix,
my pearl,
my baby,
please will you be my lady,
your beautiful and everything I need,
You make my heart heavily bleed,
I love you sincereley,
trust me this time,
I want you to be my bride and my baby,
I will do anything
not cheat anymore,
I already forgot about that dumb girl next door,
I know I screwed up,
I wanna fix it up,
I wanna stitch my mess up,
I promise my life to you so please baby say I Do,
I'll give you everything,
even do what you want me too.
I love you baby please give me a chance,

Okay okay I love you to but you gotta be tough and help us make me love you,
prove to me that I am what you wanna breathe,
hold on what is that,
Baby its a diamond,
I really mean't what I said I want you next to me all night and day,
baby I love you
Your my destiney,
you look better to me everyday,
your blue eyes and your beautiful smile,
you make living worth my while,

okay slow down,
I have something to say to you,
whats that baby?

Yes I do,
you do?
yes I'm taking a chance,
Your my groom,
I love you to the moon,
just don't break my heart and I'll love you forever
Always and forever
yes baby,
I love you forever
baby me too.

Answer 2

wow

Answer 3

thats good

Answer 4

Thanks :D

Answer 5

@errinss

Answer 6

I like it

Answer 7

Thanks @Hope210

Answer 8

oh wow...Love it..,

Answer 9

Haha thanks so much!! @SkriLL3xMast3r

Answer 10

no prob... do you plan to write more songs?
If so, LET ME KNOW!!

Answer 11

Haha yah I have written many more before so yah of course! @SkriLL3xMast3r

Answer 12

cool... Im only on my third song...

Answer 13

this is maybe my 6-7th song, but not sure lost track

Answer 14

cool... i mostly write rock songs... You?

Answer 15

Depends on the story my song tells

Answer 16

cool

Answer 17

Yah maybe we can make one together :D Well if you want :D

Answer 18

@SkriLL3xMast3r

Answer 19

what?

Answer 20

Maybe we can make a song together

Answer 21

cool... what about?

Answer 22

it can be fun!!

Answer 23

writing a song...

Answer 24

Haha yas! idk

Answer 25

neither do I...
What genre?

Answer 26

Mix of Rap and your music?

Answer 27

Rap-Metal? You supply the rap, me the metal?

Answer 28

Right!

Answer 29

cool... now the topic... I write about pretty much anything...

Answer 30

Name something

Answer 31

umm... Frailty of the human nature? fragility?

Answer 32

Anything else?

Answer 33

? u git ny ideas?

Answer 34

#got

Answer 35

Um racism, fairness within, lost soul, bullying in other words yea too many haha

Answer 36

racism?

Answer 37

g2g, bye

Answer 38

Yea its a topic at war haha

Answer 39

yea nice song.

it made me think of my ex........

Answer 40

awesome