can someone please help explain to me what all you could write about in a 3 page paper about Israel/Pakistan and the conflict with their land
so far all i have is this: Over time there has been a conflict with Israel and Pakistan, They have consistently fought over land that use to belong to Palestine but over time became taken over by Israel. Around the 19th century is when the conflict between Israel and Pakistan commenced. The land that is now primarily Israel’s claimed land originally belonging to Pakistan in 1947. In 1947 the land was populated by 86% Muslims which is the main religion in Pakistan.
What you need to do is go on Google and type in "Israel History." Get a ton of facts about the history of their land and some cultural things, economic facts, and rituals and things like that. Then do the same with Pakistan. Tell about each of them in separate paragraphs and then compare the differences in a third paragraph. Finally, look up the actual conflicts and arguments that were ongoing, and give good details. Don't just say things like "they have fought over Pakistan's land for a long time." Find out exactly why and add some nice adjectives to play up the paper. Go through all your small adjectives like "long." Type it into google like "long synonyms." For long in the sentence I gave a minute ago, I would have said, "For ages, Israel and Pakistan have had an ongoing conflict over the Pakistani's land." See how that is much more interesting than the way I said it the first time? Try things like that, make sure you double space, and you'll have three or even four pages before you know it. :)
thank you i will use what you said :3
Make sure and use lots of detail, but don't drag out sentences and then have a bunch of run-ons. Keep it to the point but well-worded.
thanks if its okay i will post my rough draft and tag you in it to look over it for me to make sure it sounds okay i suck butt at writing papers lol
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