Question

okay so, I have this book that im writing...but i need an idea of were to go with it...
any ideas from here?

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/55134047-if-i-can-dream

Answer 1

Try the english section for better help ^_^

Answer 2

okay thanks ^_^

Answer 3

yw ^_^

Answer 4

Oh. @RhondaSommer I can help you! I write my own books :)

Answer 5

Try the \(\sf\href{http:///www.openstudy.com/study#/groups/writing}{writing}\) section for better help ^_^

Answer 6

Nobody is there. So that is not useful o:

Answer 7

Link is not useful

Answer 8

i posted it in the writing section before he even said that...but I would love help

Answer 9

have you read what I have so far?

Answer 10

nope

Answer 11

it wants me to make an account to read what you wrote

I shall pass the offer.

Answer 12

8 year old girl Savannah finds herself not being able to sleep since her parents were murdered in front of her. She knows that she's the only one who saw the murderer and all she knows about them is that they have deep blue eyes.
At 16, she still can't sleep without nightmares and her world is turned upside down by a boy named Dee. The only thing stranger about him is that his eyes are the exact same color of the murderer who killed her parents. The two become close before Dee and Savannah's best friend Joseph get in an accident. She is forced to face everything that she has been running from since she was 8. Now more than anything, she wonders if she can even dream anymore.

@TheSmartOne

Answer 13

I was able to read that much :P

Answer 14

but to read the actual story, it wants me to make a free account x'D

Answer 15

Ok, here I logged in:
http://prntscr.com/9hg4bk
http://prntscr.com/9hg4o7

Answer 16

Thanks :P

Answer 17

I hope you like it :)

Answer 18

thats the first chapter :)

Answer 19

Hmm... not to be rude or anything, but using potato doesn't sound good in the story. Can you think of a better word to use that's appropriate for this story?

Answer 20

i wanted it to be something stupid...Idk why...but like...can YOU think of anything better?

Answer 21

chapter 2

Answer 22

Well I have heard people say this in movies. When they say: Ill be back before _____. Can you think of a movie that said this and tell me what they said?

Answer 23

edited

Answer 24

I editied the word

Answer 25

Ok, this part has to many repeated words. Can you think of anymore words that are the same meaning?

http://prntscr.com/9hg9f9

Answer 26

edited

Answer 27

Other then those two, its an amazing story :)

Answer 28

thank you! what did you like most? what should i do next? any other ways I can improve my writing?

Answer 29

WATTPAD!

Answer 30

Hmm I liked the mysterious part about this. You captured my attentions since the first sentences, which is really important. Next part should be how this girl is living right now, how she saw/sees the world after this tragedy. Also, how she meets Dee.

I <3 mystery books, so this book is for me :D

Answer 31

yay!

Answer 32

YEP! @CandyCove

Answer 33

I love that website so much. The fanfics are incredible.

Answer 34

The best advice I have gotten from a writing teacher is: Always remember to have fun making a story :)

Answer 35

I have had a lot of fun writing this book.... did you like the 7th chapter?

Answer 36

:P

Answer 37

@CandyCove I dont know if you watch DW but im going to be making a fanfic of him changing into a teenage girl :P I cant wait

Answer 38

Im reading all the chapters right now :)

Answer 39

lol okay :) make sure you follow me :) ill follow you back

Answer 40

let me know what you think.

Answer 41

sounds really cool

Answer 42

I can help if you want, I write all the time :D

Answer 43

yes please!

Answer 44

1. yes openstudy has a wattpad
Open_Study

2. yes you should keep this topic in Writing/Literature/English NOT OpenStudy FEEDBACK ^_^"

3. I was pretty sure Wattpad itself has forums for people to give ideas for your stories and help edit

Answer 45

I have a wattpad also it's bunnielover948, exactly the same as my username for Open Study, just don't go search it XD

Answer 46

whoops...I thought it said "go search it" lol