Question

can someone help me on a 2 page paper?

Answer 1

@safyousuff97

Answer 2

dont be intimidated by the words 2 page paper i just cant figure out how to lay it out so that it makes it easier to actually write the paper

Answer 3

oh ok what is the topic?

Answer 4

Israel and Pakistan and the conflict between them two which was fighting over who got the land

Answer 5

do u mean Palestine instead of pakistan

Answer 6

right lol sorry im still half asleep xD

Answer 7

thats ok :)
can this help i can go a little more in depth if u want ? if http://www.ifamericansknew.org/history/

Answer 8

I have seen this page many times its actually one I've been using to write the paper :) i just don't know how to layout the paper so it doesn't go from one topic to another and be scattered making hardly any sense if you get what i mean lol

Answer 9

oh ok how about starting out back then before the war started and talk about how it was like before the war and that can be the introduction paragraph what do u think?

Answer 10

that sound good i was thinking that i could introduce the whole topic in the first paragraph then in the rest each paragraph ill talk about each economy, culture, and religion, the towards the second page start talking about the conflict between them two and how it effected each one and then concluding the paper talk about who got the land and how it was settled if it even got settled

Answer 11

thats sounds really goo

Answer 12

*good
do u need help for the second paragraph?

Answer 13

probably i suck at actually writing the papers lol i can send you what i have so far if thats okay

Answer 14

did u see my message i sent u a link ?
yeah sure i can take a look after your done

Answer 15

yes i did but i was not able to open it when i clicked on the link it told me the website was blocked.... damn school computers! wait i think what i have may not be relevent cause i kept thinking it was Pakistan instead of Palestine

Answer 16

relevant*

Answer 17

oh lol https://ultius.com/ultius-blog/entry/essay-on-israeli-palestinian-conflict.html
your at school i thought everyone has winter break

Answer 18

i do online school so our breaks are a little different

Answer 19

its still blocked but here is what i got


Over time there has been a conflict with Israel and Palestine, They have consistently fought over land that use to belong to Palestine but over time became taken over by Israel. Around the 19th century is when the conflict between Israel and Pakistan commenced. The land that is now primarily Israel’s claimed land originally belonging to Pakistan in 1947. In 1947 the land was populated by 86% Muslims which is the main religion in Pakistan.
Pakistani people in 1947 had a few religions that they practiced. As it says above 86% of the population practiced the Muslim religion while 10% of the population was Christian and the last 4% where Jewish. Now there was no conflict with this in fact everything ran smoothly. During this time Zionists decided to settle in Pakistan having the image in their heads to take over the Pakistan area making it an all jewish community.

Answer 20

nicee :) is this the second paragraph ? (i had no idea there was a conflict between Pakistan and Israel) very informative

Answer 21

it might not be Pakistan thats where i think i messed up

Answer 22

then how did u know about israel taking pakistans land, israel took Palestine's land

Answer 23

can u copy and paste your assignments question so it can be a little easier?

Answer 24

@ilovebmth1234 u there?

Answer 25

yes sorry i was making some food

Answer 26

lol oh ok

Answer 27

write a 2-3 page paper about the conflict of Israel and Palestine be sure to incorporate your bibliography and use detail it your paper

Answer 28

it wasnt much :/

Answer 29

oh ok then why did u add pakistan to the essay?

Answer 30

cause i get the two mixed up lol

Answer 31

oh ok well anyways take out all the stuff u wrote about pakistan and add a little more to the paragraph and then u can go to the next pararaph

Answer 32

thanks lol ill keep you updated on it in case there is anything i may miss or mistake like i just did lmfao

Answer 33

k lol :)