Question

Christmas - My second poem.

Answer 1

what is the poem

Answer 2

I thought nowadays it is hard to feel life upgrading.
Fortunately,
Once that happens,
It makes you strive to improvise the ability to improvise what your neighbour will improvise
How to buy pride and joy.
Having Jesus forgiven our sins,
We shall feel fresh in the flesh
Like an ironic reflectance of
A senseless frankincence.
Brother,
Strive for the best and live a decent life.
If knowledge is power,
Achieve success before you can fully sketch your scratchy past.
Merry Christmas!

Answer 3

beautiful poem

Answer 4

Great

Answer 5

A freestyle type poem with some actual meaning!
These are so rare! Most freestyle like poems are written like a rap and don't make much sense.
I love this though! Your wording of things are unique :)

Answer 6

Thanks very much everybody!!!!

Answer 7

Here's the End of Year Poem as well:

We had colligated our fellow mates
To grate our mistakes and
Place the disgrace in an arrow-like fake blade that we share our mistakes.
I know we have defeated sick, stiff, deep, beast fists;
I know we battled fear and downsized the high rise os sets of pests.
We shall be victorious and raise our fortress.
If that happens to me, I would need 7 sentences to describe my life essence in heaven sense.
Untie your shoe laces,
take off your shoes,
eat some french fries,
get used to the new size.
Now everybody, let us party hard
Back in my army with some cocky branches of batches of clushes of clusters of undesirable disasters made by karate masters,
whom ultimately became stutterers.
I wish you a wonderful end of 2015 and an interesting 2016!